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THE_ARCHITECT
THE_ARCHITECTLv44mth
2024-09-03 13:14

I am going to divide my rating into different sections and I am going to be transparent Writing quality Not many words but it's almost perfect, there are minor errors here and there but it's really good...as I said not many words Story development it is severely lacking in terms of exposure but it does have a lot of potential, the flow of the story makes the MC go with the flow as if he's not alive, i would like him to make choices of his own in the future Character Design As i said before the story is too fast, i want to know about the MC and his past life, the true objective of the system , the lives of the side characters...i want them to be alive Updating quality i simply wish there were more chapters the story is pretty good World building it is severely lacking at least for me, continents, rulers , destruction , Gods , ancestors , enemies e.t.c , The academy arc felt rushed to me because he could've developed mentally first but you do you Conclusion The story is not unique but it's not generic in any way, the MC slightly feels like an NPC since he doesn't have many monologues or internal thoughts and the side characters could've more exposure so i can connect with them The story has potential no... immense potential to grow, the author may be a newbie but she/he/they/them is/are doing very well just improve the flow and look it from a perspective of a reader, I am adding this to my collections and I am looking forward to your future works cause i can see that this is your learning curve...i am sorry if i was brutal or offensive

Reincarnation Of A Swordsman: The Omni Mage

YoungCreator
4.7
204 Chs

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YoungCreator
YoungCreatorAuthor

Thanks for the honest review

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THE_ARCHITECT
THE_ARCHITECTLv4

again I am sorry if i was offensive

YoungCreator:Thanks for the honest review
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YoungCreator
YoungCreatorAuthor

Jeez! No. I sincerely appreciate your review

THE_ARCHITECT:again I am sorry if i was offensive
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Yalatola
YalatolaLv4

very good review, we need more people like that

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Tinieblas
TinieblasLv3

Good review

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THE_ARCHITECT
THE_ARCHITECTLv4

thanks

Tinieblas: Good review
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Cyclode
CyclodeLv3

Bro, would really appreciate it if you gave a reveiw to my novel, i could use such an honest and perfectly constructed review,please. It's called[THE MALEVOLENT CREATURE]

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THE_ARCHITECT
THE_ARCHITECTLv4

you sure

Cyclode:Bro, would really appreciate it if you gave a reveiw to my novel, i could use such an honest and perfectly constructed review,please. It's called[THE MALEVOLENT CREATURE]
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THE_ARCHITECT
THE_ARCHITECTLv4

i am brutal with my reviews

Cyclode:Bro, would really appreciate it if you gave a reveiw to my novel, i could use such an honest and perfectly constructed review,please. It's called[THE MALEVOLENT CREATURE]
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Cyclode
CyclodeLv3

Honesty is the best policy, doesn't matter so long as i can improve.

THE_ARCHITECT:i am brutal with my reviews
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Cyclode
CyclodeLv3

*i can improve with my writing and perspective of what readers like.

Cyclode:Honesty is the best policy, doesn't matter so long as i can improve.
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THE_ARCHITECT
THE_ARCHITECTLv4

The small connector inside my phone’s charging port is broken—the part that determines whether the phone charges properly. Because of this, my phone’s battery is low, and I’m unable to work on my chapters or complete the review right now. I’m getting it fixed and should have it resolved within 24 hours. Once it’s fixed, I’ll finish and submit the review.

Cyclode:Honesty is the best policy, doesn't matter so long as i can improve.
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Cyclode
CyclodeLv3

Np, thanks again. Also there is another story I'm writing and it's called the "IMMORTAL ASCENSION" and recently i seem to have hit the writer's block so haven't updated it that frequently but I will inform you when to reveiw that too, so please for now just review "THE MALEVOLENT CREATURE" only, after...after getting your phone fixed ofcourse, thanks a bunch.

THE_ARCHITECT:The small connector inside my phone’s charging port is broken—the part that determines whether the phone charges properly. Because of this, my phone’s battery is low, and I’m unable to work on my chapters or complete the review right now. I’m getting it fixed and should have it resolved within 24 hours. Once it’s fixed, I’ll finish and submit the review.
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