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Abstracto
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2024-07-09 03:50

Author here to review the book and give a brief intro!(more like warning). So you see, this wild idea had been roaming my mind for about a year, well mostly when some things *winks* are hard. I will warn you beforehand, but this book is really not the fainthearted, cuz you see, in this book, I AM GONNA COOK, And feel me when I say, you aren't going out of this book the same you came in. Well, unless you bring a tank of bleach to wash your eyes. Alternatively, you can head to r/eyebleach for some help. Story is not going to be updated on any strict schedule cuz this is a free write. I will try to update it daily but won't promise anything. All questions and suggestions are welcome!

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KAAL23
KAAL23Lv4

Human Form..?

Abstracto
AbstractoAuthor

Human Form: Yes. When? Stay Tuned

KAAL23:Human Form..?
JTGTitan_96
JTGTitan_96Lv4

You got those... tentacles?...From like...japan?

Abstracto:Human Form: Yes. When? Stay Tuned
pakahi7952
pakahi7952Lv1

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Abstracto
AbstractoAuthor

tf?

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mad101
mad101Lv15

hey author just shouting out into the void it's a suggestion to make the stories slow flow s smoother give him a a cloning ability he's basically an amoeba that way he can leave clones of himself all over the place

A_OV
A_OVLv13

honesty iIhave very thick skin,Yuri and NTR is where I cross the line,so is there any in this fic

Abstracto
AbstractoAuthor

NTR there is none, but regarding Yuri, it's not present btw harem members but MC is a genderless shapeshifter who likes women so there can be yuri elements between him and girls. it basically depends on how you see it and what exactly is YURI about that you don't like, is it the cheating aspect than it's understandable and you won't see that here. If it's just pure Homophobicism toward girls kissing girls, then Sorry, this might not be for you.

A_OV:honesty iIhave very thick skin,Yuri and NTR is where I cross the line,so is there any in this fic
Abstracto
AbstractoAuthor

You know that it opens a can of worms called "My clone ntred me" for many people right? I wouldn't prefer to open that.

mad101:hey author just shouting out into the void it's a suggestion to make the stories slow flow s smoother give him a a cloning ability he's basically an amoeba that way he can leave clones of himself all over the place
Abstracto
AbstractoAuthor

And regarding slow flow, I feel the story is going slow? Or does it feel fast? if it does, do tell me. We are 50 chapters in and just 1 week has passed in world

mad101:hey author just shouting out into the void it's a suggestion to make the stories slow flow s smoother give him a a cloning ability he's basically an amoeba that way he can leave clones of himself all over the place
A_OV
A_OVLv13

okay, if i am understanding this probably the mc when a girl is gonna do some yuri stuff but the harem members wont do yuri stuff with each other but the mc

Abstracto:NTR there is none, but regarding Yuri, it's not present btw harem members but MC is a genderless shapeshifter who likes women so there can be yuri elements between him and girls. it basically depends on how you see it and what exactly is YURI about that you don't like, is it the cheating aspect than it's understandable and you won't see that here. If it's just pure Homophobicism toward girls kissing girls, then Sorry, this might not be for you.
Abstracto
AbstractoAuthor

Correcto

A_OV:okay, if i am understanding this probably the mc when a girl is gonna do some yuri stuff but the harem members wont do yuri stuff with each other but the mc
A_OV
A_OVLv13

then its definitely slow and if u don'tfix that then people will rage but ur better, once read a novel with 115 chapters bùt only 2 days passed

Abstracto:And regarding slow flow, I feel the story is going slow? Or does it feel fast? if it does, do tell me. We are 50 chapters in and just 1 week has passed in world
A_OV
A_OVLv13

hmmm, i guess i can tolerate that cùz at the end of the day the mc the genderless

Abstracto:Correcto
absolue
absolueLv13

Well, I'm disappointed, personally I don't like genber bender and trans mc at all, so I'm giving up, I'd have preferred him to be a form as a man or to stay as Ditto

Abstracto:NTR there is none, but regarding Yuri, it's not present btw harem members but MC is a genderless shapeshifter who likes women so there can be yuri elements between him and girls. it basically depends on how you see it and what exactly is YURI about that you don't like, is it the cheating aspect than it's understandable and you won't see that here. If it's just pure Homophobicism toward girls kissing girls, then Sorry, this might not be for you.
Abstracto
AbstractoAuthor

Well I won't really call it trans or genderbent but whatever. You are free to not read it through and thanks for reading it till now.

absolue:Well, I'm disappointed, personally I don't like genber bender and trans mc at all, so I'm giving up, I'd have preferred him to be a form as a man or to stay as Ditto
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Welp, mc was a man that died then became a slime(ditto) and TRANSformed(lol) into a female body to engage in yuri not once but twice(before i took a break). Sounds exactly like lgbt and genderbender

Abstracto:Well I won't really call it trans or genderbent but whatever. You are free to not read it through and thanks for reading it till now.
iLeech
iLeechLv4

I once read something similar in royalroad: The Child of Ebon. Very good story and writing, but dam it is slow.

A_OV:then its definitely slow and if u don'tfix that then people will rage but ur better, once read a novel with 115 chapters bùt only 2 days passed
A_OV
A_OVLv13

it was a yandere novel i read

iLeech:I once read something similar in royalroad: The Child of Ebon. Very good story and writing, but dam it is slow.
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