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Melon_daomaster_9
Melon_daomaster_9Lv137mth
2024-07-16 22:37

Five stars ✨ for encouragement and motivation! The novel is good and there are typos here and there but I am sure it will be less as the author writes more!. By the way, The author knows too much about civil job which makes me doubt that he is... a civil servant?

I Became A Civil Servant In A Dating Sim!

SovereignofShadows
5.0
9 Chs

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SovereignofShadows
SovereignofShadowsAuthor

Thanks for the review I'll try to improve....

7mth
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Cosmic_Ceaser
Cosmic_CeaserLv3

I'll give it a five star before I start the real review. So, first of all, too few chapters to truly judge the book, but I'll tell you guys my view. Let's start with the plot: - Unlike the novels out there that just have the plots bent by the author's will, here it seems realistic. Characters: - Just like the plot, the character have reactions like a normal human would. So, this part is a check as well. World building: - Can't say anything about it right now since not much of the world had been disclosed. Now to the main thing - Grammar: - To be honest, it's not that good. It breaks the flow, and the words are in a mess. So, I will say, it's bad. Overall: - If the grammar was better, then the story would've been more engaging, but that doesn't mean that it is not like that right now. It is good. The grammar part is a let down, but the other points make up for it. In conclusion - You should try reading it once.

7mth

Sky_novel_lover
Sky_novel_loverLv3

The 'author is being lazy'... It's really good, but the 'author is being lazy' and not posting chapters. A few spelling mistakes (like3or4), but not enough to bother the readers or even notice them. The plot is really fire, but only 9 chapters so far because the 'author is being lazy'... can't help it since the 'author is being lazy'. The book is worth reading... but I regret reading it because of the lack of chapters. Now I am curious, but since the 'author is being lazy,' I don't get chapters... I hate cliffhangers... But I can't help it since the "author is being lazy." | A good book, but the lack of chapters is killing it...

5mth
SovereignofShadows
SovereignofShadowsAuthor

Well I am the Author so I'll shamelessly give a five star rating like other authors...Also if you've got any questions don't hold them back ask away I'll answer it here.

7mth
Tailor_Bhumika
Tailor_BhumikaLv1

Reveal spoiler

7mth
Nir_Shah_3968
Nir_Shah_3968Lv1

I really liked reading the plot is nice and funny.

6mth
Ronak_Navlani
Ronak_NavlaniLv1

best novel by sovereign of shadows!loved it❤

6mth
DaoistF6foCx
DaoistF6foCxLv1

Nice read good for passing time hope the author updates more and improves the grammar it will make it more fun to read... ..........................

7mth
unknown_anomaly_
unknown_anomaly_Lv2

Nice read, it has the potential to become a good novel

7mth
Cultured_Daoist69
Cultured_Daoist69Lv13

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_shadow_of_shadow
_shadow_of_shadowLv1

I just read the novel because I found the name interesting but the novel turned out to be amazing keep up the good work author-nim. I hope you continue to write as I really liked the novel so far.

7mth
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