The story is the best in the world and the author is God himself...Don't check my username, no, eyes down here. Anyhow, if you have any questions, ask them right here :3

This is an extremely impressive story. The grammar and spellings are good, with only rare minor errors that don't hinder reading at all. Unlike most, this is set in an original world. The important characters are complex and well defined, the world building is also good. Seriousness and humor are well-balanced, the pacing is also steady. We also get hints about how our mc feels being in a different world, and about not having an end goal, which might lead to interesting developments. In my opinion, this is the best of Sukuna fics. Great work, author! Keep going and pls don't drop this early.

Writing quality 4/5 (normal) Updating stability 4/5 (normal) Story development 2/5 (you could say this is neither a novel, nor a fanfic. Instead it's a shitty combination of the two) Character design 2/5 (I don't like the way author tries to communicate his views through mc monologue. Focus on the story and what matters and not your views on harem, jeez) World background 1/5 (the world doesn't exist - author made up the world. In other words anything he says goes)

A novel with great potential honestly, not only because it's not a harem but the characters are actually fun to read and the dialogues is not a mess to read. Let's just say it has the hook you want when you read. Don't drop halfway pls.

I’m liking it so far it seems to have a lot of potential

The author did a very good job writing this book. There are rarely any grammatical errors and there is a good balance of seriousness and comedy. A work of art! I highly recommend.

The overall story is good, the battle description is also good, but there is one thing that I still don't know, the world, I still don't understand the chapter about the assassin when Sukuna was shot.If I'm not mistaken, the bullet stopped for a moment before passing beside him, similar to the limitless technique, and I don't know the history of the world either because he reincarnated into Sukuna's body. Suddenly you are at risk of fighting an emotional B-rank monster because a friend you just met dies even though you just met and you don't know each other well, plus it's a burden.But the most important thing is that I still don't know the background of the world and I'm still confused, like a Chinese novel, it lets in unimportant characters and gives them cheat powers.That's all I want to tell you, there's still a lot I want to type but I'm too lazy. But everything is good, your novel author's enthusiasm is good and interesting.

The grammer is great the story development is good and the characters are unique

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