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Daoist0Z2uMD
Daoist0Z2uMDLv13mth
2024-12-16 06:31

How did you mess up the story after chapter 66, everything is mixed up and unclear. How did you mess up the story after chapter 66, everything is mixed up and unclear. How did you mess up the story after chapter 66, everything is mixed up and unclear.

rebuilding in walking dead

DaoistCjmElH
3.5
209 Chs

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bossmanee_dutreize
bossmanee_dutreizeLv13

C'est une bonne fanfiction, j'aime bien ! ! le mc est un peu arrogant, et sa personnalité est un peu frustrante, mais l'histoire en elle même est cool et j'aime bien le style de reconstruire une civilisation !!

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YourShadowsenpai
YourShadowsenpaiLv14

Great novel I would really recommend, just wish there was more chapters so I can bing. Anyway keep up the good work

7mth
James_Dragon
James_DragonLv11

its a 3 star for me some wrong pronouns wrong spelling wrong names and other problems if ur desperate read it its kinda mid just to past time i guess

6mth
ConfusedZombie
ConfusedZombieLv15

Dude, you need an editor. The names keep changing, which is disconcerting and messes with the flow of the story. I like it so far but in each paragraph the names change and the POV switches are random if you find someone to fix that then this story would drastically improve.

3mth
TheHighElite
TheHighEliteLv4

After chapter 66 everything felt like a walking fever dream to read i got such a bad headache now damn but overall fairly decent up till chapter 66

3mth
ko13
ko13Lv1

Se ve que es una traducción del chino, se puede tolerar un poco eso. El cambio de nombre entre capitulos o en algunos casos en el mismo capitulo los traduce en 3 formas diferentes. Pero despues del capitulo 65 cada parrafo esta mezclado, parace un rompecabezas mal armado.

3mth
PeeeRS
PeeeRSLv2

The novel is good, but I need more chapters, and lately the paragraphs in the last chapters are very disorganized. I would appreciate it if you could give me the link to the original translation or where you got this novel from.

4mth
TheGrayKing22
TheGrayKing22Lv14

It was good until the story doubled up on a chapter and the following chapters were a jumbled up mess of paragraphs not in order. It became no longer understandable and after a couple more chapters to see if it fixed itself out, it unfortunately didn't.

1mth
Breckie_Smith
Breckie_SmithLv1

Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent—your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare

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