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PeeeRS
PeeeRSLv22mth
2024-10-28 22:33

The novel is good, but I need more chapters, and lately the paragraphs in the last chapters are very disorganized. I would appreciate it if you could give me the link to the original translation or where you got this novel from.

rebuilding in walking dead

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bossmanee_dutreize
bossmanee_dutreizeLv12

C'est une bonne fanfiction, j'aime bien ! ! le mc est un peu arrogant, et sa personnalité est un peu frustrante, mais l'histoire en elle même est cool et j'aime bien le style de reconstruire une civilisation !!

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YourShadowsenpai
YourShadowsenpaiLv14

Great novel I would really recommend, just wish there was more chapters so I can bing. Anyway keep up the good work

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Daoist0Z2uMD
Daoist0Z2uMDLv1

How did you mess up the story after chapter 66, everything is mixed up and unclear. How did you mess up the story after chapter 66, everything is mixed up and unclear. How did you mess up the story after chapter 66, everything is mixed up and unclear.

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James_Dragon
James_DragonLv4

its a 3 star for me some wrong pronouns wrong spelling wrong names and other problems if ur desperate read it its kinda mid just to past time i guess

3mth
ConfusedZombie
ConfusedZombieLv15

Dude, you need an editor. The names keep changing, which is disconcerting and messes with the flow of the story. I like it so far but in each paragraph the names change and the POV switches are random if you find someone to fix that then this story would drastically improve.

1mth
M_Static
M_StaticLv4

it was good till all chapters and paragraphs mixed up..................................................................................................... Original Fanfic name? Anyone?

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TheHighElite
TheHighEliteLv4

After chapter 66 everything felt like a walking fever dream to read i got such a bad headache now damn but overall fairly decent up till chapter 66

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ko13
ko13Lv1

Se ve que es una traducción del chino, se puede tolerar un poco eso. El cambio de nombre entre capitulos o en algunos casos en el mismo capitulo los traduce en 3 formas diferentes. Pero despues del capitulo 65 cada parrafo esta mezclado, parace un rompecabezas mal armado.

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