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Mohamed_Lazaar_5443
Mohamed_Lazaar_5443Lv117mth
2024-08-18 04:11

No es mi taza de te, y una trama demasiado rebuscada, ¿recuerdas es una niña de ni siquiera 3 años ?, y a toda la gente que dice q le gusta es solo porq es un fanfic de miércoles.

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Frowfy
FrowfyAuthor

Thank you for the review, sir. I understand what do you mean. The trial also was my first try with mystery and I made a great mistake to making it longer than should 😣.

Frowfy
FrowfyAuthor

I'll try to make it more than "A fanfic about Wednesday, so I gave you 5-star". 😤

Mohamed_Lazaar_5443
Mohamed_Lazaar_5443Lv11

Me gusta mucho Miércoles, así que le daré otra oportunidad, confío en que a través de prueba y error todo mejora.

Frowfy:I'll try to make it more than "A fanfic about Wednesday, so I gave you 5-star". 😤
Frowfy
FrowfyAuthor

I hope you like the remake, but I don't know if my little experience can make something so suit your tastes. I just can say that will be better than this one.

Mohamed_Lazaar_5443:Me gusta mucho Miércoles, así que le daré otra oportunidad, confío en que a través de prueba y error todo mejora.
Frowfy
FrowfyAuthor

If you you still don't like the remake tell me about the point you don't like this time if possible. This will help me to improve my writing.

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