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LastGod
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Sorry but how is this about your main character if the first VOLUME is about everyone but the main character..... thats not a MAIN character. I would understand if the first one or 2 chapters are about world building or building the people that live in his town into believable characters. But and ENTIRE VOLUME. At the very beginning of the fanfic. It just a very poor choice the immediately sidelines your MC into a side character.

Twilight: The Way Blood Flows in You

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DaoistisZXMX
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I disagree his/she is doing things differently and I like how it's going so far

DaoistisZXMX
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it's ok I like what you are doing don't be discourage

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DaoistisZXMX:I disagree his/she is doing things differently and I like how it's going so far
Gunts92
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tell me when they started with the mc please, I will start from there