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devansh_bangaLv31mth
2024-10-01 11:59

Firstly, I would like to commend the author for creating a great foundation. The story until now has shown a lot of potential in the small changes that I can see impacting the late-game stages in a great manner. The characters feel like people and can be said to have the reactions of normal people( as normal as you can get in nations monetizing murder). I think the power scale matching between Xianxia and Naruto world has also been done well, with body forging peak analogous to Lee's full strength in the exams. Overall, good pacing, fleshed out characters, would love to read more. Once again, Thank you author

Naruto: The Otherworldly Cultivator

Krio_Genix
4.1
143 Chs

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Krio_Genix
Krio_GenixAuthor

Thank you, I appreciate your kind words.

1mth
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

Author where is the update

Krio_Genix:Thank you, I appreciate your kind words.
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DarienDragonheart
DarienDragonheartLv3

Honesty, it isn't bad if you just ignore the fact that the entire fic is basically the OG Naruto storyline with a calm MC who shows one or two moves from his previous world every 20 chapters later. Still, his overall strength is somehow equal to the OG Naruto even now. So, I'll just drop it instead of waiting for this to get better.

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Ole_Tessmann
Ole_TessmannLv4

Basically a complete rehash of the original with a smarter naruto. Until now there hasn’t been a difference in plot but it’s to be expected since the mc wants to run low. I’ll Be dropping it since It’ll probably keep following this trend. Good writing tho

3mth
OmegaAuthor
OmegaAuthorLv3

This story is just straight up bad, everything is copy and pasted from the anime with slight changes and the mc is supposed to be from the murim with an unparalleled cultivation technique and yet nothings changing from the canon 73 chapters in.

2mth
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Hmmm, interesting story you have here, and as for Harem, 5 to 6 waifus would be more then enough for him,unless you planing to give him few more Wifes then this number i just writed, anyway i vote for Hinata,Sakura,Ino,Tenten,Tamari,Karui.

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Firelord
FirelordLv15

The story is very bland. We don't know anything about the main character's past life or abilities, only that he was in Murim and that the author nerfs him. The main character has overpowered tools at his disposal, but we see nothing of their impact. His personality is also quite boring. 😴

3mth
CRUZEN
CRUZENLv3

Got mixed feeling about this story. On one hand we get a calm and mature Naruto without any future extra knowledge about this world but on the other one we still get the same story that we all know. The path that mc takes is a bit different, but it still reaches the same destination.

3mth
Demonic_Dragon_01
Demonic_Dragon_01Lv14

Overall a good start and I liked the story concept but it is a slow pace story....

4mth
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

I stand corrected, its actually pretty good read, dont let this fools persuade you to not read the novel, its very much worth the read.

2mth
Krio_Genix
Krio_GenixAuthor

Author obligatory review here :). Not much else to add here, I think I put everything in the synopsis of the fic. I just hope some people will enjoy the story :)

4mth
GENJI
GENJILv4

Nice start.

4mth
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