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DarienDragonheart
DarienDragonheartLv48mth
2024-08-14 18:43

Honesty, it isn't bad if you just ignore the fact that the entire fic is basically the OG Naruto storyline with a calm MC who shows one or two moves from his previous world every 20 chapters later. Still, his overall strength is somehow equal to the OG Naruto even now. So, I'll just drop it instead of waiting for this to get better.

Naruto: The Otherworldly Cultivator

Krio_Genix
4.2
287 Chs

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Rational_madness
Rational_madnessLv4

Thank you kind poison tester for sparing my time and brain cells. May the heaven refining venerable bless you in finding good fanfics

8mth
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Bakimaru
BakimaruLv2

So, it's just another lazy writer that can't come up with their own plots. Too many of those lately. Unoriginal, lazy, and boring writers. Thanks for the heads up.

6mth
6
PoopieBooty
PoopieBootyLv3

Im trying to give it a chance but yea its relatively boring tbh. They made MC some random cultivator so the story doesnt become too unbalanced and they have to create new plotlines. They nerf him just enough so they dont have to get creative

Bakimaru:So, it's just another lazy writer that can't come up with their own plots. Too many of those lately. Unoriginal, lazy, and boring writers. Thanks for the heads up.
5mth
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mynameofcourse
mynameofcourseLv4

Basically a complete rehash of the original with a smarter naruto. Until now there hasn’t been a difference in plot but it’s to be expected since the mc wants to run low. I’ll Be dropping it since It’ll probably keep following this trend. Good writing tho

8mth

OmegaAuthor
OmegaAuthorLv3

This story is just straight up bad, everything is copy and pasted from the anime with slight changes and the mc is supposed to be from the murim with an unparalleled cultivation technique and yet nothings changing from the canon 73 chapters in.

8mth
PoopieBooty
PoopieBootyLv3

Read up to current chapter. Its just overall pretty boring. They skip over any and all training that could show the diff between power structures. But the thing I dislike the most is that I am left expecting something more that will never come. He is supposed to ge a cultivator yet is messing around with kids his age. He has no pride that cultivators usually have and he seems like he was just kind of a random cultivator from his world. Also, idk if this is for author to keep plot aligned with OG plot or what but it is kind of annoying waiting for new chapters just to be disappointed time and time again. He just lets sasuke go and do whatever emo shit he wants under the guise of “ill mind my own business” yet he ends up dragged into his bullshit in the end anyways. He puts up with kakashe basically teaching him jack shit as well. Had so much potential but overall just a wasted opportunity. And dont even get me started on the forced bs with mc and ino cause author gotta have a harem tag.

5mth
Firelord
FirelordLv15

The story is very bland. We don't know anything about the main character's past life or abilities, only that he was in Murim and that the author nerfs him. The main character has overpowered tools at his disposal, but we see nothing of their impact. His personality is also quite boring. 😴

9mth
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Hmmm, interesting story you have here, and as for Harem, 5 to 6 waifus would be more then enough for him,unless you planing to give him few more Wifes then this number i just writed, anyway i vote for Hinata,Sakura,Ino,Tenten,Tamari,Karui.

10mth
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

I stand corrected, its actually pretty good read, dont let this fools persuade you to not read the novel, its very much worth the read.

7mth
CRUZEN
CRUZENLv4

Got mixed feeling about this story. On one hand we get a calm and mature Naruto without any future extra knowledge about this world but on the other one we still get the same story that we all know. The path that mc takes is a bit different, but it still reaches the same destination.

8mth
Unmatched
UnmatchedLv5

I’ve made it to ch 50… it’s still the same story as the original. Genin exam with the same interactions (sand siblings, hokage grandson) only difference is the dialogue

6mth
Demonic_Dragon_01
Demonic_Dragon_01Lv14

Overall a good start and I liked the story concept but it is a slow pace story....

10mth
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