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Rational_madness4dCommentedP-2 of previous?
Chapter 245: This Lady is Determined to Chase You!- Rational_madness7dReplied to Joseng_Mingque
one is fire of destruction (its on WN), don't remember the other one
This is a vital question. I was sick so I ended up holed up in my room, with too much free time and so wrote till chapter 31. The plot progression is almost just as slow as it is currently. I was thinking of introducing a time skip of around a few months instead of actually going through the day-to-day nuances of his life, since I cannot simply make it interesting enough for you to read to me to write. Please comment as to whether or not I should put the time skip in chapter 32? After all, we all know that the main action will begin after Klein descends, since everythign is limiting Max from advancing to Sequence 8 currently. - Rational_madness13dReplied to TheSleepySloth
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"Emiya," Shinji said, scratching his chin and furrowing his brow. "What kind of AV do you like? [BEEP] or [BEEP]?" - Rational_madness14dCommented
Please don't be about jade beauties and showing off
[Yes, this system is the Great Villain System of Myriad Realms, specifically designed to cultivate the ultimate villain across all worlds!] The voice boomed with a hint of pride. - Rational_madness14dCommented
Alchemy and blacksmithing did? They weren't 5 before...
During this time, not only had Wayne's exclusive witcher skills—Swordsmanship, Signs, and Gwent—improved, but several of his auxiliary skills had also seen some growth. However, none had reached the level five threshold for a qualitative leap. - Rational_madness18dCommented
Plot holes as other comments state, in earlier chapters you say he spent 2 months practicing chakra control, but then you say this is the second month when he is roaming around, you don't state where he got the kunai or if he knew how to make them, and you frequently repeat the same thing over and over... let me guess, in the latest chapter mc is still like less than 12? Immediate drop
Madara just looked at him for a while before starting to walk in the direction the bandits had gone. He knew how ungrateful the people of this world were, so he didn't care much for it, of course, he understood this young man, it had happened to him too, and it was probably the same group of bandits, now he could avenge his parents of this world. - Rational_madness18dReplied to The_Venerable_one
Nah, I'd be into that if I was 14, false alarm lol
Conquer this fourteen-year-old boy! - Rational_madness22dReplied to DaoistHRiAgC
Yes, but assuming he is in his 20s when he died, already makes him more than 10 years older than the rest, thus having more knowledge and experience, which is what adds to the mental part of chakra. I agree with everything else though, mihawk is nerfed and a 10y old kage is just ridiculous
Ryujiro had been increasing his chakra reserves since he was a child. Now, his chakra was no less than that of a mid level Jonin. - Rational_madness22dReplied to DaoistHRiAgC
I mean, if he has the template then he has a one piece body, which are not only stronger and have higher potential, but they have much kore vitality as well. Chakra is a combination of physical and mental energy, so a one piece body and an older soul would realistically grant that chakra. I am not saying I want the mc to be OP or not, i read to latest chapter and author pulled completely unreasonable moves and messed timeline. That aside, probably a senju or uzumaki would have chunin chakra at 7-8, though there aren't any facts to prove or disprove this either
Ryujiro had been increasing his chakra reserves since he was a child. Now, his chakra was no less than that of a mid level Jonin. - Rational_madness22dCommented
Ok, timeline is completely off... This occured years before graduation, and graduation was the same time naruto stole the scroll, while you made the massacre after it...
A few months later, something unprecedented and terrifying happened in Konoha. - Rational_madness22dCommented
Hope he becomes a rogue ninja and chops up everyone that fights him
Moreover, Ryujiro didn't feel any sense of belonging to Konoha itself. - Rational_madness22dReplied to DaoistHRiAgC
one piece body, plus transmigration for spirit, it is reasonable to be jonin, now if it was kage that would be ridiculous
Ryujiro had been increasing his chakra reserves since he was a child. Now, his chakra was no less than that of a mid level Jonin. - Rational_madness22dReplied to AstralFear
Honestly while this is fine atm, the "perks" he gets when a skill reaches level 5 is more exciting, though I dont't remember the one for swordsmanship or if there even was one. Author should make some quests give ability points to stack them up
The power coursing through his veins was undeniable. Each ability held immense potential, especially for a Witcher like himself. His dream of becoming the ultimate witcher seemed closer than ever. However, a tinge of frustration lingered. Ten ability points only unlocked the primary stage. Mastering the Elder Blood's full potential would undoubtedly require a significant investment of both ability points and time. - Rational_madness24dReplied to SkillsMasterAkuraiNero seemed to like it he would hiss anytime he saw the blood or the fights with the Katana .
- Rational_madness24dReplied to SkillsMasterAkuraiNero seemed to like it he would hiss anytime he saw the blood or the fights with the Katana .
- Rational_madness25dCommented
20 basic swordsman levels means 20 str and 20 agi, additoional 10 for overall level, makes it 30 in both so far. 9levels in official swordsman is 18 str and 18 agi, making it 48 so far. 10 str from chef and 10 from agent make it 68... Additionally it was mentioned he got several stat points from training alone, they should be at least 80 points by now...
Personal Attributes: Strength 64, Agility 57, Stamina 14, Intelligence 17, Charm 16, Luck 1 - Rational_madness26dReplied to Desire96
I guess you are going for something like ayanokoji based on "ability to learn is ridiculous", which is fine, but don't make mc have 200iq by default from that, of course you can make him find or create yin based jutsus that increase intelligence if you are going down the big brain route. Good luck with the fic, I will come back when there are at least 20 chapters
The shurikens passed through the air hitting nothing. The original substitution is the Jutsu which forms a thread of chakra that connects a log or similar object by chakra thread to the user and then a high-speed circular-like motion is done to do an evasive manoeuvre, which involves releasing some chakra from the body too, similar to Shunshin, but all that is done by the jutsu, thus is not full a conscious effort. - Rational_madness26dReplied to kiddeath1998
Honestly im fine with it but the mc feels like a little female dog crying all the time, i literally don't care about those dumb emotions and would rather get to the plot
"I hope none of them are dead yet." I said, glancing around the rest of the room. Like outside the floor was soaked with water but the wires were better placed here so I figured the water was simply a product of the demon mask interrogator, "Actually, who are you?" - Rational_madness26dCommented
I think its alright so far, but except for small grammar mistakes in places, for the names of the jutsu you should use either full english or full japanese names, ideally full english as someone that doesn't read them that often would not recognize the names. Finally, give the mc a name and introduce his skill properly, as he trained for 500 years and you don't say what he trained in, also taijutsu is missing from his evaluation form above but i am not sure if that is intentional
The shurikens passed through the air hitting nothing. The original substitution is the Jutsu which forms a thread of chakra that connects a log or similar object by chakra thread to the user and then a high-speed circular-like motion is done to do an evasive manoeuvre, which involves releasing some chakra from the body too, similar to Shunshin, but all that is done by the jutsu, thus is not full a conscious effort. - Rational_madness1mthCommented
enamoured?
"Were you enumerated with your prince that you forgot?"