Item: The Nemean Lion
Rating: 3.2
Author: A_wall1206

A_wall1206Lv154mth

2024-08-13 21:16

is this based off the fanfiction story where Harry goes through the same thing after the chamber and ends up with tonks luna hermione lavender and the patil twins? well more like you took inspiration from the story? try not to over do it with the descriptive information about the forest you have been reusing information with different wording i get it brings forth the imagery but it can be overdone when its done multiple times in the span of a few paragraphs. just some constructive criticism.

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