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Mad_MannyLv12mth
2024-12-02 14:18

Dude after 150 chapter the author just changed his writing style. Its fees like I am reading some ancient text or something. Like how should I say this, it's like this line here ' The Null Estate loomed ahead, an indomitable fortress of heritage and might, carved into the heart of the rugged valley' Its presence exuded an aura of silent authority, an ancient testament to the power and lineage that guarded it, standing steadfast as if to shield against the encroaching shadows cast by recent upheavals.The estate's entrance unfurled like the maw of a slumbering giant.' I mean you could have just said the' null estate' that it feels like he is trying to fill the chapters with unnecessary words to expand them.

MIGHT AS WELL BE OP

LORDTEE
4.6
323 Chs

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Divya_DevLv3

yeh it's feel like he tells us a story it's don't feel like novel at all in last 20 chapter I hardly seen any conversation between two character

2mth
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UsewLv4

You can tell he's inspired by Atticus' odyssey

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LORDTEEAuthor

A Gem if I should say the least. Give it a try

8mth
24
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Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] First of all, the author has warn that this MC will be Super OP in his synopsis and his profile, so if you not a fan of OP MC from the beginning, it is better if you don't read this.. BUT if you love OP MC from the beginning without nerfing, I would recommend this novel.. Reincarnated MC? Check✔️ Supported by Universe? Check✔️ OP System? Check✔️ Daily Sign-in function System? Check✔️ Shop function System? Check✔️ Fast pace? Check✔️ Not nerfing MC at all? Check✔️ Strongest Bloodline? Check✔️ Second Strongest Physique? Check✔️ Infinite mana? Check✔️ Has Sung Jin woo Power (Solo Levelling)? Check✔️ Has all element? Check✔️ Has many powerful skills? Check✔️ Born in one of the strongest families? Check✔️ Has Human-race, Dragon-race, Vampire-race, Demon-race, Fairy-race, Werewolf-race, Titan-race, Dwarf-race and so on? Check✔️ Has Academy Arc? Check✔️ All powerhouses of all races have a kid in this era and attended on the same years as MC? Check✔️ And because of the above, MC generation is called Golden Era? Check✔️ Keep his secret to himself? Check✔️ Smart and cunning? Check✔️ MC world is always in constant wars with Ultimate enemy, The Demon since millions of years ago? Check✔️ So far, even all race have united to fight the Demon, they still can't win? Check✔️ This novel MC is the strongest MC I ever read in either comic or novel.. And I love it.. Every path MC takes is superb, this is really my dream main character, strongest in everything without any nerf.. I'm giving this review based on what I read up to Ch63 (latest chapter for non-privilege). So far, this novel is the best for me.. My favourite so far.. Downsided? Well, the update is quite average, which is 1 chapter per day (I hope for it got updated faster) and expensive privilege price.. The price is double compared to other novels..

6mth
18
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Mystical_ZLv10

reads just like a Chinese novel with a little less power hiding, mc has a huge ego and there is 0 romance, bro is maiden less. oh and mc is best looking guy around! oh and did i forgot to mention mc is soooo good looking! oh wow! look guys!! the mc is sooo handsome guys!!! (you get the point)

3mth
11
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Dibya_Devv_8792Lv3

Author, your novel has great potential. It has good world background, story,plot, etc.But your writing style has problem. Every chapter you write recently(last 50 chapter)all has unnecessary word filled the 80% of story it's feel like reading a text book not feel like a novel.In a novel there should be character to character conversation not a third person describe like telling us children story.so, author I suggests yo to change your Writing style

2mth
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Mark_NileLv14

Wonderful work you are doing here. I love how the story is paced and the MCs character. Thank you for being consistent in posting the chapters. Keep up the good work, and I wish you all the best on this journey. You have my support.

7mth
7
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CephalonCodaLv15

Im torn. on one hand, the book is really good. (other than the odd fixation on having the scale of everything seemingly made to be Kilometers, which I question if the author really grasps the scale of how large that is... But it doesn't make the story bad to read, so im ignoring it.) I also appreciate the focus on the story and not making it a harem. pacing feels a bit off at times but overall enjoyable read. On the other hand, this story is about as money hungry as an author could ever be... half the authors' messages are asking for gifts and extra money donations. I understand wanting to make a profit off a book, totally understandable. But after a certain point, it's just ridiculous. I usually buy privilege chapters on stories I enjoy, but this is probably the first story in at least 3 months I refuse to do so. the price for 2 chapters ahead is 50 (most authors had it for unlock cost +1 but sure, thats fine), but then unlocking the 3 after it is over 300? Like seriously? Im all for supporting authors, but that is just insane. Dont even get me started on tier 3 that jumps to over 800 coins.

3mth
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Yonatan_KetemaLv3

can you be more shameless hm the writing is medicare at best you have mc with huge ego non-natural relationship with family ( like saying that grandpa this grandpa why not use their own name ,give them time to develop than rushing it who was mc ,his former parents (if he have ) what was the former world what kind of person was he his age before to know his maturity no world building not character development (mother father who are they no real conversation ) not great power system AND. absolutely illogical thought system of characters father leaving for many years and act like it's normal at reunion his mother an dmaids not noticing his difference its'sjust saddenningbut hey it's web novel as long as you have the fake audience it will make you king better start to proof read and REALLY read other best authors work like shadow slave ( cuz writing is good world building etc..) ,Atticus odyssey too p.s don't delete this one too though[img=disgusted]

3mth
5
VoidmonkLv14

Really loving this novel!! Make sure you keep posting author. Love the MC

7mth
5
1
Divya_DevLv3

Bro story,plot,world building everything is good but it's too slow peace becuse of that it's sometime feel boring like chapter 171-177 has description which if you wish you can wright it 2 chapter but you waste 8 chapter free pass

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