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Cecilia_Hersch
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2024-10-04 07:51

Heres my unbiased review despite me being a staunch Furina/Focalors supporter, owning even C6 Neuvilette and C6 Furina herself. First off, I usually have low expectations for Genshin FanFics due to 80% of them being pretty horribly written (either with zero plot or the plot just diesn't make sense with the characters) So, writing quality is good, it can still be improved but its already pretty good. Story development makes sense, doesn't rush the plot and many of the characters involved like former Knave (that evil woman), Perrie and Clervie interacting with the MC all makes sense. Like there isn't any overwhelming plot points that didn't make sense. Character design for the MC and his allies are well built. Lorewise, it all connects with Fontaine's own lore and doesn't sound unbelievable. Updates wise, its goated great. But take a rest sometimes too and don't forget hydrate yourself with the quality Fontaine water. World background is great too. I love how the writer combined the Archon quest with their own plot.

Genshin Impact: The Admiral of Fontaine

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Biased review from the author himself. I created this Fanfic because I'm the biggest Furina simp ever, to the point that I didn't even finished the archon quest because I can't stand seeing her crying, this is my first fanfic, and my only fanfic, and I intend to finish it. No harem in this story, Furina is the sole love interest and one day... Focalors as well.

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you'll get an instant 5 star since you follow the rules, no harem with furina on it/no harem, and I like Furina, even though I can't play Genshin cuz of my stupid potato phone, I'm deeply in love with her character. So Kudos to you author! may the goddess smile at you.

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Well written. The dynamic between characters is quite engaging and the plot is quite decent.

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Grey_Zone_Pub
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so far interesting . keep up the good work pal.. from same author but.. I can't keep update my work!

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Slow & depressing story..... I have read 10 chapters for giving it a chance but it's taking too much time to start with a good kabooom!! Author has also added too much information dumb here and there while talking about extra things which are many times not related to plot. It's like a story with questions and answers explaining every fine detail as if someone will be taking a test for all this information.

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