Cecilia_Hersch

Honkai Star Rail has very few fanfics, even lesser when finding for a good fanfic but this one, this one is really good minusing some minor grammar issues that can be overlooked. (The fact that Cocolia survives already makes me want to rate this 10/5 stars.) Story has good pacing. 74 chapters while more than 75% of it is lore on Belobog which is great. MC is Emanator of Remembrance which is crazy lmao because I remember someone said Ruan Mei could ascend to be Emanator. MC's lore is pretty balanced, not overpowered from the start and incomporates Honkai Impact abilities with HSR world. Story makes sense, writing update is well balanced. I recommend this for people who wants Cocolia to live (like me).

I love Mommy elves lmao but it will still be unbiased review. Writing wise its good with no errors at all. Story and world development makes sense and does not feel unbelievable. MC's power scaling is balanced and fair as the system he uses still requires hardwork from him. Update wise is astounding. This is one of the better Fantasy-Oriented stories where all races and kingdoms didn't have that one cliche enemy (Demon Lord). If you like Elves (Milf Elves), read this story bwahaha

Just saw the chapters list and its horrendous. Its just someone spamming ads for people to spend money while barely 10% of those chapters are the actual story. Stay away from this cesspool of abomination.

Taimanin fics are hella rare and most of it usually just ends in R18 every chapter but this, this is some quality writing and good plot progression. Plot makes sense (if i remember correctly from playing the JP vers) and the MC is goated. Slapped all the enemies as if it were nothing. MC progression makes sense and not seem too unbelievable. Updates wise, its really good too. I recommend this fic if you are tired of Lilith always bullying the Taimanin girls

Writing wise, it is very good. The plot and world building makes sense and doesn't seem unbelievable. Also it tells the perspective of what original genshin events would have been like without Lumine/Aether and replaced with another being on par with Morax. Updating wise is amazing. People would think that having an overpowered Geo Archon would be boring but no, its actually pretty funny to see Zhongli get shocked everytime (since this man always nonchalent in the game).

The writing quality can definitely be improved but story development is surprisingly good due to the humor factor of MC being able to use Honkaiverse weapons. World background makes sense since writer manage to combine the logic of Honkaiverse Divine keys and Herrscher Cores with Genshinverse logic which makes it pretty balanced. All in all, this fanfic still pretty good.

Heres my unbiased review despite me being a staunch Furina/Focalors supporter, owning even C6 Neuvilette and C6 Furina herself. First off, I usually have low expectations for Genshin FanFics due to 80% of them being pretty horribly written (either with zero plot or the plot just diesn't make sense with the characters) So, writing quality is good, it can still be improved but its already pretty good. Story development makes sense, doesn't rush the plot and many of the characters involved like former Knave (that evil woman), Perrie and Clervie interacting with the MC all makes sense. Like there isn't any overwhelming plot points that didn't make sense. Character design for the MC and his allies are well built. Lorewise, it all connects with Fontaine's own lore and doesn't sound unbelievable. Updates wise, its goated great. But take a rest sometimes too and don't forget hydrate yourself with the quality Fontaine water. World background is great too. I love how the writer combined the Archon quest with their own plot.

Absolutely bad. Writer stated in the info that they would not paylock it and will try their best to put out quality chapters. More than 90% of all chapters is paylocked through Patreon and they put in low effort to meet the 15,000 word mark in the 1st chapter by copypasting a bunch if words. Character design is a 3/5 because this is a Fanfiction and characters that existed already came from the game itself. Writing Quality is 1/5 because of the low effort in the 1st chapter where they used copypasting ti meet the 15,000 word limit.