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The_reader_ofnovelLv145mth
2024-07-16 09:40

The start is over the top and I can’t take it seriously at all. I was hoping the introduction to the story would be interesting however the story seems to focus on humor on top of that, its the boring ROB giving the tipical wish before reincarnation. I immediately dropped

Percy Jackson: The Black Dragon Shadow King

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I wanted to have a humorous start since the ‘jump toward Truck-Kun felt over used’ Though, I do thank you for not giving a 1 star review and giving a proper critique rather than review bomb.

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The_reader_ofnovel
The_reader_ofnovelLv14

No problem, just wasn’t expecting it to have that kind of introduction based off the tags. I personally do not like ROB beginning especially when they have no real point in the story other than putting the MC in the other world and giving them abilities. I prefer if it was more mysterious like if some sort of outer God has some sort of plan that no one is aware of until later it just feels more natural that way. when it’s something like just some random entity, giving powers to the MC it just feels like the MC just gets whatever he wants and there’s no meaning behind of it.

A_Real_Werewolf234:I wanted to have a humorous start since the ‘jump toward Truck-Kun felt over used’ Though, I do thank you for not giving a 1 star review and giving a proper critique rather than review bomb.
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Author here, this story is here honestly just a fun idea I have. It is not going to be my focus as I have two good fanfics at the moment.

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