it's a good story , i like how the MC is inspired by superman but he isn't a superman clone , yes his good guy like superman but his different the mc is willing to use his resources as a kryptonitian selfishly e.g he wants to find a way to mass produce kryptonitian fabric to to sell for money ,the mc is a closet pervert , the mc enjoys fighting and pushing himself and the mc is willing to kill ppl if they really deserve it and the MC is little more reckless . if u tell me the mc is the smarter and more perverted version of goku. my only problem is that your first meeting with war women felt a little forced , didn't mind u saving the girl from being raped their so many girls being raped or sexual assaulted daily,that it isn't weird for u to stumble upon a girl about to raped while flying through multiple states with super hearing but war woman interaction felt forced I understand it but war woman being their at that exact same time with her battle clothes to investigate a simple incident of a wall being destroyed didn't make sense , i would written war woman in causal clothes that way it wouldnt be weird for her to be there bc she could have just been strolling and just happened to hear a noise so she decided to investigate and run into u by anyway this a good read , i wish luck and u are going to need it bc u decide to write a good mc on webnovel app , the home to emos, hormonal teenagers and degenerates . I once saw a novel got ruined bc the novel happened to be reviewed by a bunch of emos that didn't like the fact the mc is good person
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