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MarudameOssan
MarudameOssanAuthor10mth
2024-06-25 11:54

Ossan is back after hiatus. Now we're going urban. There will be many interesting scenario in this one because of the MC's skill. Ask your question here, let me spoil you with my answer.

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TsaoCao
TsaoCaoLv15

Welcome back! I’m looking forward to this new adventure and story!

Leonardo_Jesus
Leonardo_JesusLv4

Will you continue Sins paradise?

Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

Welcome Back, didn't know you were on a hiatus as I've also stopped reading for personal reasons.... Urban? count me in, hopefully it will be as good as sins paradise or even better.

karim_abdelrazek
karim_abdelrazekLv4

I don't think it's good for him to use two bodys to pick up girls and lie to them about his name and his dream, because in the future, he will either leave them to remain in his real modified body, or he will tell them that the two are the same person, but then none of them will accept him because he created not only a different body and name, but a dream, goals, and personality. totally different

Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14

he has a second body? i guess I'm not even going to give this story a chance then...

karim_abdelrazek:I don't think it's good for him to use two bodys to pick up girls and lie to them about his name and his dream, because in the future, he will either leave them to remain in his real modified body, or he will tell them that the two are the same person, but then none of them will accept him because he created not only a different body and name, but a dream, goals, and personality. totally different
karim_abdelrazek
karim_abdelrazekLv4

he can change his body and save changes and load what he save, so he makes 2 load slot One looks like him but better, and the second one looks like an idol then he go pick girls with the second one and get back to the first one when he go to school or with his friend

Malcolm_Massey:he has a second body? i guess I'm not even going to give this story a chance then...
MarudameOssan
MarudameOssanAuthor

if you reach chapters 30, you will notice that he is already showing his improvement to his friends and girlfriends. there is no 2 identities anymore

karim_abdelrazek:I don't think it's good for him to use two bodys to pick up girls and lie to them about his name and his dream, because in the future, he will either leave them to remain in his real modified body, or he will tell them that the two are the same person, but then none of them will accept him because he created not only a different body and name, but a dream, goals, and personality. totally different
MarudameOssan
MarudameOssanAuthor

nah that's just first few chapters, and he has a reasonable excuse as to why. It doesn't make sense to suddenly become handsome so he showed improvement day by day until he's close to the ideal appearance and surprise everyone

Malcolm_Massey:he has a second body? i guess I'm not even going to give this story a chance then...
KacbRe
KacbReLv10

Continue author, I like your novel

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

quick question before I read this is there any yuri in the harem not a fan

Edgelord_Sadboi
Edgelord_SadboiLv5

i have this same question

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR:quick question before I read this is there any yuri in the harem not a fan
B0mbaCl0ck
B0mbaCl0ckLv15

This author doesn't add yuri. Not that deep into the hole as others. Harem is clean too

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR:quick question before I read this is there any yuri in the harem not a fan
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

thanks for answering 😁 As long as the harem is free from any yuri I'm good 👍

B0mbaCl0ck:This author doesn't add yuri. Not that deep into the hole as others. Harem is clean too
Joethedeath
JoethedeathLv15

whered ya go?

Joethedeath
JoethedeathLv15

its sad that this may be dropped, i was looking forward to another ossan novel

MarudameOssan
MarudameOssanAuthor

I got a job interview and sadly have no time to continue anymore T_T If I have time, I will definitely create an ossan novel again. My apologies

Joethedeath:its sad that this may be dropped, i was looking forward to another ossan novel
Joethedeath
JoethedeathLv15

i and probably alot of us would prefer you continue one of your current ones lol

Joethedeath
JoethedeathLv15

especially as your the only one ive seen so far that wrote the main haeroines as a pair of little cuckqueen twins

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