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November_WeatherLv49mth
2024-07-07 05:35

I like the story so far it has a lot of questions that can be potentially answered in future chapters that could be really interesting like -how many aliens does he have -who reincarnated into this world and who gave him the watch to begin with all questions that could be answered later on if you give the story a chance

Omnitrix Ascendant

ExplorerVan17
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ExplorerVan17
ExplorerVan17Author

Hey guys. it's the author. I'm giving myself a 5⭐ review here. please comment on your thoughts and suggestions here.

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Admiral_Leo
Admiral_LeoLv3

It's a well written novel. but there are spaces where it could be improved. I would recommend everybody give this novel a try.

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Docinproblems
DocinproblemsLv4

As it is too soon for a true review, imma spit ball some suggestions for the author. The very first thing I'd suggest is to take aspects from 2 sources, Baldur's Gate 3 and the motion comic 5YL found on the YouTube channel-The Ink Tank-who gave the green light to the people to use everything on 5YL.(According to their video, 5 MOST ASKED Questions About 5 Years Later) Perhaps there's an ongoing arc where the protag develops a Dark Urge from the power he's gaining from his fallen foes, driven by it. Perhaps a Malicious God sees the early signs of it and goes "aight bet" and cranks that Dark Urge to 300%. The protag then is standing at a crossroads. One side leads to becoming the better man, to not become the Judge/Jury/Executioner. To not succumb to his Dark Urge, instead striving to exist in harmony alongside it. The other side of the road leads to becoming the sole figure to decide the fate of everything, to become a Godly being. Let the Dark Urge fully control the protag. To kill everything on sight, in cold blood, for power. To destroy even the most insignificant distraction and/or annoyance brought about his way. To cause death to everything and everyone, even the innocent.

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luminous1_vanqu10
luminous1_vanqu10Lv4

I have read up to the 20th chapter and so far it's nice.

9mth
WalkingTall
WalkingTallLv5

Cool story with a lot of potential, can't wait to see how it goes!!! LET'S GOOOOOOOOOOO!!!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍🐐

8mth
oldeus
oldeusLv13

can you give us name of AI, please 🙏 😢 😭

9mth
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