This atmosphere reminds me of the old days. with LOTM I LOVE IT I think it has a lot of potential to be a standout novel in the near future, unless the author runs out of ideas.

translation: Perfect as of chapter 32 story development: very good so far, the chapters each some hold significance and don't feel like the usual Chinese novel word count fluff chapters. character design: Exellent, they feel full and each with their own personality instead of the usual Chinese one dimension side pieces that usually follow in these types of novels. update stability: nothing to say, some auther is diligently slaving away for our daily enjoyment world background: great but not original. might as well have put a disclaimer saying I copied my power system and general world level from lord of mysteries.

It is an interesting and enjoyable novel to read, the MC isn't directly the lead of the story instead he takes a more god-like approach of quietly observing the family he had initially chosen when he had just awoken to grow his power and influence. This novel I would say has a good amount of political intrigue and the characters aren't boring to read about, whether it be a random character introduced or one of the leads. It also has a somewhat good balance of action and tranquility, though I would say the pacing of time does get a bit quick at times, but to me, it wasn't a bad thing so just keep that in mind when reading. I could continue but instead of rambling on and on, I will simply say it's a very good novel and worth reading.

It's a very new concept, at least for me, and so far it's implimented really well. I've read upto chapter 205, and so far the story development is great, the character growth for various characters is interesting and their personal relationships intertwine in interesting ways. Hope it continues to stay interesting, it's a difficult concept to pull off so I'll see how it goes.

Rarely do I rate a book however this is probably my favorite translated novel

surprisingly really good ND enjoyable ,plot is good, mc guide, characters too

read upto 300 chapters and the author has managed to kill everything that could have made the story special. the story becomes increasingly linear and follows the same chinese first disciple then master then comes hidden elder. the story stagnates so the author added unnecessary character insights that don't ever connect to the story at all. the mc is literally an immortal so at least time lapses could have been added to revamp the story line but at the end of the day this is one of the hardest troupes to write so i guess i can't criticise too much

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It's perfect. Thank you author for this novel. Sad that it has to end

Great story overall. kinda glad the ending wasn't dragged out but it still somehow seemed rushed... idk