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Aurealis
AurealisLv72mth
2024-11-10 13:57

The start of this novel is so bad and so predictable. Not to mention the plot holes of the system that author didn't bother to explain. The mc is so bland and stupid. It is a good story for new readers but for veteran reader it is so full of predictable plot.

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ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

Eh I thought it was a decent read. And I haven’t enjoyed a cultivation novel in a while.

Chrollocifer
ChrollociferLv5

that means this novel fit your taste

ShaadyJ:Eh I thought it was a decent read. And I haven’t enjoyed a cultivation novel in a while.
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

I mean yea that’s how it usually goes. But this guy said that this novel wouldn’t fit the taste of “veterans” and I disagreed as proof.

Chrollocifer:that means this novel fit your taste
Mikochi_D_Elite
Mikochi_D_EliteLv4

He only said it is a predictable plot for veteran. Your reading comprehension failed you.

ShaadyJ:I mean yea that’s how it usually goes. But this guy said that this novel wouldn’t fit the taste of “veterans” and I disagreed as proof.
Aurealis
AurealisLv7

decent doesn't means it's good.

ShaadyJ:Eh I thought it was a decent read. And I haven’t enjoyed a cultivation novel in a while.
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

He said it is a good story for non-veterans, but for veterans the plot is too predictable. This implies that the story is not good/at least not as good as it is for non-veterans. It seems your comprehension needs a little adjusting. Hope you enjoyed! ;)

Mikochi_D_Elite:He only said it is a predictable plot for veteran. Your reading comprehension failed you.
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

Decent implies that a story is at least 4 stars. At least for me. You rated it two stars and that is far below decent to me. Two stars is a horrible read and I would not call this book decent whatsoever if I wanted to rate it two stars.

Aurealis:decent doesn't means it's good.
Mikochi_D_Elite
Mikochi_D_EliteLv4

so funny that you wrote a full paragraph to explain what you meant and instead become a proof that your reading comprehension failed you. please read your own comment to realize how messed up it is. i think you need proofreader for every comment you makes.

ShaadyJ:He said it is a good story for non-veterans, but for veterans the plot is too predictable. This implies that the story is not good/at least not as good as it is for non-veterans. It seems your comprehension needs a little adjusting. Hope you enjoyed! ;)
Aurealis
AurealisLv7

you're the one who called it decent not me, i only said it was predictable story. stop trying to force your opinion on other people.

ShaadyJ:Decent implies that a story is at least 4 stars. At least for me. You rated it two stars and that is far below decent to me. Two stars is a horrible read and I would not call this book decent whatsoever if I wanted to rate it two stars.
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

“…need proofreader for every comment makes.” Lol enough said. I’ll see you Mr. Professional Writer man that doesn’t know basic grammar somehow?

Mikochi_D_Elite:so funny that you wrote a full paragraph to explain what you meant and instead become a proof that your reading comprehension failed you. please read your own comment to realize how messed up it is. i think you need proofreader for every comment you makes.
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

??? Do you not realize that is exactly what you did? In fact, you did it “better,” by including—and generalizing—two entire groups of people. I disagreed, thats it. Y’all are funny. Read more ig. ✌️

Aurealis:you're the one who called it decent not me, i only said it was predictable story. stop trying to force your opinion on other people.
Mikochi_D_Elite
Mikochi_D_EliteLv4

you can't even read properly duh. you need to go back to school. read my comment again and now do it slowly without being clouded by anger. stop embarrassing yourself on the internet.

ShaadyJ:“…need proofreader for every comment makes.” Lol enough said. I’ll see you Mr. Professional Writer man that doesn’t know basic grammar somehow?
Aurealis
AurealisLv7

do you see me trying to force you to accept my opinion? i don't mind people who disagreed with my opinion. look at your own reply and how you keep trying to force me to agree with you

ShaadyJ:??? Do you not realize that is exactly what you did? In fact, you did it “better,” by including—and generalizing—two entire groups of people. I disagreed, thats it. Y’all are funny. Read more ig. ✌️
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

Right. Cya ✌️

Mikochi_D_Elite:you can't even read properly duh. you need to go back to school. read my comment again and now do it slowly without being clouded by anger. stop embarrassing yourself on the internet.
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

Never said that you have to think it’s decent. I said that, as a veteran, I do not think the plot was predictable enough to not be decent. That’s it. I disagreed. “Eh I think it was decent.” That’s the gist of what I said. Hardly forcing an opinion. You generalized two entire groups and declared something a fact based on assumptions YOU made. Then you said decent does not mean good. I think it does mean good, at least for me. You’ve been “forcing” your opinion this whole time. My first comment didn’t even warrant a reply. It’s whatever man, I said my piece. See you around.

Aurealis:do you see me trying to force you to accept my opinion? i don't mind people who disagreed with my opinion. look at your own reply and how you keep trying to force me to agree with you
Aurealis
AurealisLv7

your reading comprehension is so bad as the other person said. i have never once force you to accept my opinion. hundreds of book read with this kind comprehension is so sad.

ShaadyJ:Never said that you have to think it’s decent. I said that, as a veteran, I do not think the plot was predictable enough to not be decent. That’s it. I disagreed. “Eh I think it was decent.” That’s the gist of what I said. Hardly forcing an opinion. You generalized two entire groups and declared something a fact based on assumptions YOU made. Then you said decent does not mean good. I think it does mean good, at least for me. You’ve been “forcing” your opinion this whole time. My first comment didn’t even warrant a reply. It’s whatever man, I said my piece. See you around.
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

Neither have I. So I guess I can say the same for you. ✌️

Aurealis:your reading comprehension is so bad as the other person said. i have never once force you to accept my opinion. hundreds of book read with this kind comprehension is so sad.
Aurealis
AurealisLv7

you really need to read your reply to me. You're the one who said this novel is decent then suddenly you make it like I'm also saying it is decent.

ShaadyJ:Neither have I. So I guess I can say the same for you. ✌️
ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13

Never did that but it’s whatever atp. I made a clear distinction between me calling it decent (at least 4 stars for me) and you rating it two stars thereby labeling it horrible.

Aurealis:you really need to read your reply to me. You're the one who said this novel is decent then suddenly you make it like I'm also saying it is decent.
Aurealis
AurealisLv7

your second reply literally implied that i said this novel is decent. I don't know how you didn't realize it when it was so obvious. maybe you didn't intend to do it and it was just a poor choice of words but it is still your mistake. it's really tiring arguing with people who didn't even realize their own mistake.

ShaadyJ:Never did that but it’s whatever atp. I made a clear distinction between me calling it decent (at least 4 stars for me) and you rating it two stars thereby labeling it horrible.
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