Translation quality is acceptable with minor spelling mistakes and occasional gender mistakes. The overall story is a bit dull but the core idea is original and catches the eye hard. The problems are preferential and them are 1) MC doesn't proactively seek more arts to gain points. Which slows pace a huge margin. 2) Cultivation system is too inconsistent in my eyes. While there is a good and hard work from author when he make a good math of power for each technique and layer - the idea that each realm needs different techniques, and variety of them at that, wich don't even have to be related to each other gives a strong feeling of Lego. Accumulation of techniques gives quantitative amass of strength like training and not qualitative enhancement of cultivation. Some techniques don't even allow to master the realm to perfection... You'd better introduced complete cultivation arts that encompass all the necessary sub-techniques for different realms but have solid and overall attributes
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