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Tom_cavemanLv152mth
2024-12-18 09:06

It was a great read til around chapter 250. After that it’s like the author forgot the title of the novel and what was mentioned previously. I can let small things slide like gender mix ups and name mix ups here n there slip. But adding content that wasn’t even discussed in previous chapters and making it seem like it’s important is really stupid. Go back and rewrite the novel from beginning with a new title if your gonna do that. Seriously it went from goddess secretly gave me triplets to twins so fast and poor mengmeng was forgotten. Bring back Mengmeng! Poor baby :(

Oh my god! The goddess secretly gave birth to three obedient daughters for me

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