Review Detail of ThePauzer in Marvel: I Started by Containing SCPs

This novel sucks. it reads more like cliff notes than an actual story. To expand; Writing quality: 3/5 This is a well translated novel for all the gripes i have with this. There are no major spelling mistakes, grammar is decent and it makes sense to read. however, the interactions between characters leave a lot to be desired. The conversations have no depth, the characters dont seem to think at all. Updating stability: 5/5 i cant comment on this so ill leave it here Story development: 1/5 There is no actual story being told imo. it is threat after threat and how the characters deal with them. The individual mentioned at the beginning seems to have no relevance whatsoever. the pacing is all over the place. if you like fight after fight with no reasoning then this is the story for you. only reason im giving this a 3 is because i like the concept. I dont often see scp fanfics, and this one had a great idea. however… Character Design: 1/5 I would give this 0 if i could the characters are cardboard cutouts compared to their originals. They seem to have no individual thoughts. Everyone is like the same person trying to put on a fake accent, badly. The MC mentioned at the beginning doesnt matter. World background: 4/5 Its a fanfic so i cant say much about this. 8/10 for the picks of the universes.