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MaluopLv48mth
2024-06-18 12:43

What’s the main difference between this and the original as a first time reader?

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droopyauthor
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Like the very basic plot is same. But there was a lot of unnecessary information dump and cringe elements in it, which didn't stand out too much when I was writing them like 2 years back. So, I am restructuring the 1st and a part of the 2nd volume mainly, as by the middle of the 2nd volume things had become quite nice...

EroFan
EroFanLv4

so how do I read this? do I read 1st volume here then proceed to the other book for the 2nd volume?

droopyauthor:Like the very basic plot is same. But there was a lot of unnecessary information dump and cringe elements in it, which didn't stand out too much when I was writing them like 2 years back. So, I am restructuring the 1st and a part of the 2nd volume mainly, as by the middle of the 2nd volume things had become quite nice...
droopyauthor
droopyauthorAuthor

This is it now. There's no other book. Stick with it.

EroFan:so how do I read this? do I read 1st volume here then proceed to the other book for the 2nd volume?
dylan_pyle
dylan_pyleLv14

so no romance,caring about others right, experience packs are not going to jump out for him right.a true villain is like fang yuan (revered insanity) or legion( greed all for what)

droopyauthor:Like the very basic plot is same. But there was a lot of unnecessary information dump and cringe elements in it, which didn't stand out too much when I was writing them like 2 years back. So, I am restructuring the 1st and a part of the 2nd volume mainly, as by the middle of the 2nd volume things had become quite nice...
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