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Maluop
MaluopLv47mth
2024-06-18 12:43

What’s the main difference between this and the original as a first time reader?

Chaos and Order - A Multiverse Fanfic

droopyauthor
4.9
391 Chs

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droopyauthor
droopyauthorAuthor

Like the very basic plot is same. But there was a lot of unnecessary information dump and cringe elements in it, which didn't stand out too much when I was writing them like 2 years back. So, I am restructuring the 1st and a part of the 2nd volume mainly, as by the middle of the 2nd volume things had become quite nice...

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EroFan
EroFanLv4

so how do I read this? do I read 1st volume here then proceed to the other book for the 2nd volume?

droopyauthor:Like the very basic plot is same. But there was a lot of unnecessary information dump and cringe elements in it, which didn't stand out too much when I was writing them like 2 years back. So, I am restructuring the 1st and a part of the 2nd volume mainly, as by the middle of the 2nd volume things had become quite nice...
6mth
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droopyauthor
droopyauthorAuthor

This is it now. There's no other book. Stick with it.

EroFan:so how do I read this? do I read 1st volume here then proceed to the other book for the 2nd volume?
6mth
dylan_pyle
dylan_pyleLv14

so no romance,caring about others right, experience packs are not going to jump out for him right.a true villain is like fang yuan (revered insanity) or legion( greed all for what)

droopyauthor:Like the very basic plot is same. But there was a lot of unnecessary information dump and cringe elements in it, which didn't stand out too much when I was writing them like 2 years back. So, I am restructuring the 1st and a part of the 2nd volume mainly, as by the middle of the 2nd volume things had become quite nice...
4mth
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TobiZone
TobiZoneLv15

Having read the Original, i can say, that this Novel is one of the best i have read, Top 3 at least. For those that are new, i can say, just wait a bit and see. It will get better the more the story progresses. Way better and also more fun. Starts are always a bit slow but the better the Foundation, the better the story. 👌👍

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Kelavan
KelavanLv6

Started reading the original one a while back. Didn't like much since the mc was evil to the core, like killing babies evil to get what he wants. Not my cup of tea. Couldn't stop reading though. Author has a way of writing. It's not out in the open per se, but you just can't stop reading before knowing what next chapter is about, like every good novels. Author is consistent with his story, meaning not much plot holes, if there is any. Good world building, with a good foundation and brick by brick, he had built it with no cracks yet. 500 plus chapters, the guy is still adding bricks seamlessly. My advise? give it a read for about 20 chapters and you would thank me for suggesting this.

7mth
tai_master9903
tai_master9903Lv5

great novel. highly recommend, author knows how to write complex characters so you might have to be a little patient at the start.

7mth
EndlessPilgrimage
EndlessPilgrimageLv4

I'm not really good at reviews. This might even be the first I've given on this app. All I can say is if you like this multiverse genre, intelligent MCs, realistic novels, suspense where you're given the clues buh you're still shocked by the reveal etc. You'll find all this and more in this novel. Trust me bro... 😆

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Milk_Hunter
Milk_HunterLv14

Gotta say, I'm thrilled to see a revamped version of your original work! It's a masterpiece, a story in a league of its own, and I'm both glad and honored to read it. Not many stories can portray such mastery, depth, lore, and emotions quite like yours. Thank you for all your hard work!

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atome_365
atome_365Lv4

I really want to like this story but its too depressing, the mc is just a villain, not as in a anti hero making hard choices but as in cruel and sociopathic, it maked it hard to cheer for him.

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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

.........................................

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KGB_Chan
KGB_ChanLv4

One of the best novels I've ever read, it feels more like a regular novel with some cameos rather then a complete fanfic and for that I salute you author, this version is the revamped version of the original novel, and the improvements are great, so give it a try.

6mth
Armand_Targaryen
Armand_TargaryenLv6

This fanfic is very good, and if you enjoy an intelligent and evil MC who will do anything to achieve their goals. It’s perfect for you.😁👍

6mth
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