well. I really hoped it wouldn't be this way. but it seems it's 'that' kind of story. (SCROLL DOWN for EXAMPLE of how the rest of the story will prob go if you want to skip the yappin) I hereby declare this an 'over the top' kind of story where the characters overdose on their actions and reactions. Also just 4 demon generals b4 the demon king, well....short story? I was def drawn in by the idea of the story and how the beginning started, but the conversations and the way the protag acts is too much in line with a jp mc of an anime when it comes to their speech and ideas. Some ppl like that, but I, for one, don't. The idea was really good, I just think the story background and the mindlessness of the npc the mc contracted is a bit too much to handle. The EXAMPLE of why I left: after defeating the demon general and unlocking the timelocked zone, they get a new weapon and are Bing-chillin until all of a sudden, a big beetle rushes them!? What's the thing to do? Clearly, it's to use a skill that takes 90% OF YOUR HP TO KILL THIS BIG BEETLE (who is def stronger than the demon general who you just got finished fighting after hours of combat [-_-])!? It's the kind of overkill that is just unnecessary, in fact I would liken it to the character from overlord, except overlord had a good world background and supporting cast of characters and other concepts that kept it going. Not saying this story is bad at all, but I guess I had too much expectations on what the main characters were gonna be like. Def give this a try though, at least 15 ch so you can make your own decision on whether this story is worth.
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