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2024-06-24 00:54

will give it 5 stars but it has a stupid approach and not my personal favourite as the mc did not think but started by contacting Naruto and asking to befriend him and he is clan less and an orphan note that this 2 point is not what causes me to stop but this is what is 2 reason that cause the plan of approaching and befriending Naruto stupid, case closed.

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Casual7
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i'll spoil u (concerning the clanless/orphan part) with this if u want to read it: although MC isn't in a clan technically and is an orphan, it doesn't mean he won't get clan-related kekkai genkais (Particularly jutsus like Ice Jutsu), as for clan dojutsus, MC will get a dojutsu in the future

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RuberXLv4

nothing with clan/orphan but how the approach with Naruto was handle but I gave this 5 start because I will read this again when more ch are there and also to stop people from giving 5 star because of this Naruto approach because let me tell you webnovel people are savage have no-harem tag 1 star, have harem tag 1 star, like just little to little thing they nitpick because a fanfiction don't go there way

Casual7:i'll spoil u (concerning the clanless/orphan part) with this if u want to read it: although MC isn't in a clan technically and is an orphan, it doesn't mean he won't get clan-related kekkai genkais (Particularly jutsus like Ice Jutsu), as for clan dojutsus, MC will get a dojutsu in the future
Casual7
Casual7Author

tbf, im not one of those authors who just allow that to be a review since i want one like urs so i'd just delete it if someone posted 1 star over harem/no-harem or no review at all

RuberX:nothing with clan/orphan but how the approach with Naruto was handle but I gave this 5 start because I will read this again when more ch are there and also to stop people from giving 5 star because of this Naruto approach because let me tell you webnovel people are savage have no-harem tag 1 star, have harem tag 1 star, like just little to little thing they nitpick because a fanfiction don't go there way
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