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The character design and story development could use some work, but as a person starved for Tower of God content, this work looks to have a supreme amount of potential. One piece of advice; when doing a POV, it needs to be in first person, otherwise it's not a 'point of view' but just an altered third person perspective. I would use Grammarly or something similar to help with the writing first person segments.