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AGENTYASH
AGENTYASHLv137mth
2024-09-29 13:35

overall, it's very good up to what I have read, but it's too dark for my liking . First, why wild tribe , it could be anything and it's convenient to MC rememberd everything but his Most OP Ability, he would have thought 1000 ways to use it better is last life but conveniently he forgot and mistakenly used it for wild tribe , that is only thing I do not like in this other things are fine

LEVEL EVERYTHING UP in my Eldritch Tribe

Notorious_911
4.0
401 Chs

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AGENTYASH
AGENTYASHLv13

the Dark part is About his mother and His Family , this part is Very good but too Dark for my Liking

7mth
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StaringCat
StaringCatLv4

can you elaborate more? I don't mind spoiler

AGENTYASH:the Dark part is About his mother and His Family , this part is Very good but too Dark for my Liking
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AGENTYASH
AGENTYASHLv13

his family kidnaps his mother after he gets her back , first time he wakes up his mother is gone , he gets her back , next time he wakes up his mother is gone again , and his brothers hate him biological brothers , all of this for not Having the core of family , a Large nobal house with many powerfull people keeps kidnaps mc's mother to use him and force him to stay in family , what resone dose thay have to not let go one week boy or at Leat let him stay with his mother

StaringCat:can you elaborate more? I don't mind spoiler
6mth
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StaringCat
StaringCatLv4

thank you

AGENTYASH:his family kidnaps his mother after he gets her back , first time he wakes up his mother is gone , he gets her back , next time he wakes up his mother is gone again , and his brothers hate him biological brothers , all of this for not Having the core of family , a Large nobal house with many powerfull people keeps kidnaps mc's mother to use him and force him to stay in family , what resone dose thay have to not let go one week boy or at Leat let him stay with his mother
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