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Medas_Morningstar
Medas_MorningstarLv44mth
2024-08-15 00:10

the story is good. it needs some small improvements here and there still it's pretty decent. i like the mc he is smart , charismatic, and cunning, however there are things I don't like. first, small things like author writing number in words instead of just typing the number for example he writes three hundred -eighty four instead of just 384.also the idea of leveling everything up is good however the mc cheat require for him to do tasks often repeating an action related to the skill to level it up , the reward from each level up is a minimal increase in proficiency while the requirements for each level doubles everytime that makes the mc need to waste alot of time and effort to level a single skill so it can become useful . i read to chapter 26 where mc want to level his aim proficiency at level 1 he can hit anything in 1m at level 2 he can hit anything in 2m and so on and so forth the requirements for him is to hit an enemy from afar and if he misses he losses his progress in that level. the plot is interesting i might give it 10 more chapters to see if anything improves . this my personal intake on the nove i hope it's helpful.

LEVEL EVERYTHING UP in my Eldritch Tribe

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