Item: Picking up girls in a dungeon?
Rating: 3.4
Author: Dash6217

Dash6217Lv149mth

2024-07-22 03:54

Honestly, the story is decent but it feels flat like going through the motions. It lacks any emotional pull for me with a lackluster MC and hardly any interesting dialogue with other people. I usually only give novels 10 chapters but I gave this one 17, but again it lacks anything unique or interesting to make it stand out for the rest of the fanfics

Picking up girls in a dungeon?

Supreme_Dragon_God

Not enough ratings

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