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Naigelton
NaigeltonLv217d
2025-01-05 06:45

the plot is very basic and the dialogue between character make it feel like mc is in a npc world.. and somehow mc is a son of a mother who works in xavicers instetute yet he is treated like a time bomb lol its weird asf cause they dont even treat real timebombs as they treat mc " they are literally spying on him lol" and the biggest L of them all is that while our favorite girls and marvel characters are all grown up our mc is a kiddy "5 years old" and thus its pretty easy to deduct that he will not get any girls from the favorite genereation" jean/emma/storm/blackwidow etc etc" of super heroes in marvel cause most of them have watched him grow up from 5 years and up lol so yeah thats a big L . the writing is good iguess but because of the dialogue and plot/story is very basic it kinda drags down the whole story + with my own opinion of the mc being a kiddy while all my favorite girls and super heroes is grown ups , thats why i gave it such a low score :)

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Medas_Morningstar
Medas_MorningstarLv4

same i don't really like the part where the popular girls are grown ups and mc being a kid in order to be 'unique' and because they are overused well they are overused for a reason. though i wouldn't give it that much of a low score

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