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FrightKnight88
FrightKnight88Lv144mth
2024-06-26 03:26

3,2,2,3,2 15 chapters+1 word count post, no hint of DC, i assume whatever film it is that he is currently on he is just following the plot word for word because nothing really makes sense at all so the story flows like trash. Can't recommend because outside of it not being a match for the title the story itself just isnt interesting or compelling in the slightest, and author is advertising their patreon in the latest chapter.

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Panda_World
Panda_WorldLv13

um dude his orignal universe is dc he lives in gotham

FrightKnight88
FrightKnight88Lv14

If that’s true then it didn’t do a good job conveying that, not like it’s mentioned more than once in that case

Panda_World:um dude his orignal universe is dc he lives in gotham
FrightKnight88
FrightKnight88Lv14

Also what does your reply have to do with my review outside of that it’s taking place in Gotham? Because I read all chapters up to that point which was like 13 and didn’t see anything remotely dc

Panda_World:um dude his orignal universe is dc he lives in gotham
Panda_World
Panda_WorldLv13

The 1 or 2 chapter explains him being i gotham there is a reason it is set up like this you need to read

FrightKnight88:Also what does your reply have to do with my review outside of that it’s taking place in Gotham? Because I read all chapters up to that point which was like 13 and didn’t see anything remotely dc
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

Also this isn’t an author it’s a translator

FrightKnight88
FrightKnight88Lv14

And?

ThanatosGreekGod:Also this isn’t an author it’s a translator
FrightKnight88
FrightKnight88Lv14

So one chapter vaguely explains that it’s set in dc and somehow my review is magically irrelevant? Are you like the alt account of the author/translator? You act like I one starred the story

Panda_World:The 1 or 2 chapter explains him being i gotham there is a reason it is set up like this you need to read
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

thats means its not on translator for any plot mistakes hes just translating original text

FrightKnight88:And?
FrightKnight88
FrightKnight88Lv14

so that means what for my review?

ThanatosGreekGod:thats means its not on translator for any plot mistakes hes just translating original text
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

“Author advertising paetreon” it’s the translator advertising, and this helps towards them translating additional works. The book being bad isn’t translators fault so don’t insult him for advertising his paetron when for 99% of readers including me are reading his translations the absolutely free

FrightKnight88:so that means what for my review?
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