I write this not to say everything is awful. I think the author had something he/she wanted to write. Story wise however, I find it all over the place. Firstly it's teaser is misleading. Then we are introduced to a 9 yo mc followed by an immediate 12 year skip. Almost right after that we are told he has one of the 12 supreme blades. Then he has realized conquerors haki out of nowhere. And right after that it skips over to all of a sudden he got the rumble rumble fruit. There's no journey, no substance. We are told "then this happened" instead of shown. But most of all, if we are to care about a character, we as readers need a journey to read. Development of a character. There's none of that here. My apologies to the author, my intentions are to critique this story, not speak ill of you.
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