Item: Forged In Hell - Shadow Slave Fanfic
Rating: 5
Author: Nicopox

NicopoxLv47mth

2024-06-17 04:46

I'm not really used to rates stories but from what I read ( chapter 17) the writing quality is good enough to be immersed in the story with no flagrant grammatical mistakes ( English being my 2nd language ). Concerning the Story development as I said earlier I'm currently on chapter 17 but so far I don't see much incoherence compared to SS (though it doesn't mean that Shirou his just a bystander), concerning the character design there is not much to say As for the Updating stability we'll it's seems Stable enough . Regarding the world background we'll it's a SS fan fic so 5 stars guarantee The only flaw that I would give is that so far the dream realm seems to """soft""" compared to the original ( though it's only been a couple of chapter since they entered their first nightmare so it's too early too judges). Overall I really enjoyed reading the story so far and I can't wait for the next chapters.

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