Yeah, I am reviewing my own story, what you gonna do about it. I wouldn’t be doing this if one of the 508(at the time of writing this) of you were to actually leave a review. smh.

For those who are going to read this story, know that this MC is not Shirou Emiya, he doesn't look anything like the one from Stay Night or Miyu-Verse, he is a totally different character, he looks like he was more based on Alter and he has "Mind of Steel" since the fire, he finds happiness in killing monsters and is bipolar, he has nothing to do with the canonical versions, he has the "Mind of Steel" in a strange way when this ability should represent sacrificing his morals and feelings in favor of "justice", Steel Mind Shirou is the Shirou who had his "heart of glass" broken and moved forward like a machine, he takes no pleasure in his actions, he just does it, he would kill any ally or enemy For the sake of his goal, this Shirou would have sacrificed the army and left one of the two behind, choosing the more useful one and leaving and not this contradictory excuse.

I'm not really used to rates stories but from what I read ( chapter 17) the writing quality is good enough to be immersed in the story with no flagrant grammatical mistakes ( English being my 2nd language ). Concerning the Story development as I said earlier I'm currently on chapter 17 but so far I don't see much incoherence compared to SS (though it doesn't mean that Shirou his just a bystander), concerning the character design there is not much to say As for the Updating stability we'll it's seems Stable enough . Regarding the world background we'll it's a SS fan fic so 5 stars guarantee The only flaw that I would give is that so far the dream realm seems to """soft""" compared to the original ( though it's only been a couple of chapter since they entered their first nightmare so it's too early too judges). Overall I really enjoyed reading the story so far and I can't wait for the next chapters.

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I really like this so far, such as the spin the author took on shirou, or the take on his power like avalon not being an attribute but a growing memory. Only thing I don't really like his how fast the first and second arc were since 350+ chapters were compiled into just 20+

amazing But I have a question. Do you intend to making a part of the main cohort and I think he will be serving nephis with everything. Of course, he will not better do something unjust, but still I think he'll be loyal to her. Because. Even if she isn't moral She still brings justice and hope

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I'm not bot I'm just being honest base on my opinion

Author please be a Cassie x shirou story. You can add some sprinkle of harem moments here and there. But please 🥺 make a Cassie x shirou ship