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Railson_Mateus
Railson_MateusLv115mth
2024-11-03 08:41

I like the story, I just think you're getting lost by adding too many external elements like werewolves and vampires. If you want to strengthen the MC, then add a well-made level system. Thanks and keep writing.

FTWD Shattered World

Bobainox
4.8
49 Chs

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Bobainox
BobainoxAuthor

Yes, it's a little hard to make it fit the supernatural with a world like TWD. I tried to make it somewhat logical as a mutation, but it doesn’t fully come through; it ends up feeling bland in the end. However, by the time I started the fanfiction, it was already set up that way, so I pushed through with it. I try to keep it somewhat balanced between being overpowered as intended and having a plot that still has action to play out.

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Railson_Mateus
Railson_MateusLv11

I appreciate you continuing and even though I don't like the supernatural part, as long as you keep posting I will keep reading. Thanks again

Bobainox:Yes, it's a little hard to make it fit the supernatural with a world like TWD. I tried to make it somewhat logical as a mutation, but it doesn’t fully come through; it ends up feeling bland in the end. However, by the time I started the fanfiction, it was already set up that way, so I pushed through with it. I try to keep it somewhat balanced between being overpowered as intended and having a plot that still has action to play out.
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Bobainox
BobainoxAuthor

Celebrating 104k+ words, way more than I thought I'd write. My past fanfics were around 30-40k. On to the next 100k! Thanks to those who are following the fanfic and supporting it with power stones, that helps the motivation to continue bringing more content. From this book, I gain nothing more than the joy of bringing it to you and myself of writing it.

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huH2
huH2Lv4

finally some ftwd fanfic hoping for more chapter to come man and u can trust this work if u read his previous work but i hope u will not drop this anyways keep the good work man

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Keiou_Owlo
Keiou_OwloLv3

The best FTWD story I've had the pleasure of reading. Many people may not like it because of things in the story, but I don't care. I hope it continues.

5mth
Mateus_Gastaldi
Mateus_GastaldiLv1

Muito bom, continue atualizando.. como você disse autor, não serei um leitor anônimo, estou acompanhando sua história.. é muito boa comprarada as muitas outras histórias do universo the walking dead. 🙏🏻👊🏻

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Fanfic_Lovers
Fanfic_LoversLv3

Well I don't know how to make detailed review.. So obviously it's a cultured read with an interesting plot, and an interesting story development ( which has a good potential if done right).[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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12r13r14r
12r13r14rLv12

its a great start, keep up the great work

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SonofALkh
SonofALkhLv14

nice work.

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Forseti_0
Forseti_0Lv4

i Love this story, great OC characters and good dinâmica witb the family, the mc is powerful and not a moron, Plus his decisions make sense.

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Yanix_Mirochin
Yanix_MirochinLv1

I have always liked Walking Dead fanfiction, there are many interesting stories that have few chapters and are no longer updated. Finally a good fanfic with a lot of chapters has appeared. I update the page every day in search of any Walking Dead fan fiction, I hope that you will not give up writing fan fiction.

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