I like the story, I just think you're getting lost by adding too many external elements like werewolves and vampires. If you want to strengthen the MC, then add a well-made level system. Thanks and keep writing.
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Yes, it's a little hard to make it fit the supernatural with a world like TWD. I tried to make it somewhat logical as a mutation, but it doesn’t fully come through; it ends up feeling bland in the end. However, by the time I started the fanfiction, it was already set up that way, so I pushed through with it. I try to keep it somewhat balanced between being overpowered as intended and having a plot that still has action to play out.
I appreciate you continuing and even though I don't like the supernatural part, as long as you keep posting I will keep reading. Thanks again
Bobainox:Yes, it's a little hard to make it fit the supernatural with a world like TWD. I tried to make it somewhat logical as a mutation, but it doesn’t fully come through; it ends up feeling bland in the end. However, by the time I started the fanfiction, it was already set up that way, so I pushed through with it. I try to keep it somewhat balanced between being overpowered as intended and having a plot that still has action to play out.
