Celebrating 104k+ words, way more than I thought I'd write. My past fanfics were around 30-40k. On to the next 100k! Thanks to those who are following the fanfic and supporting it with power stones, that helps the motivation to continue bringing more content. From this book, I gain nothing more than the joy of bringing it to you and myself of writing it.
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Mooooore need Moore. Also heard up I noticed you switch/messed up which Clark sister is doing what. Like who is in the room with him. You say it’s Claire one minute then it’s Alicia instead. Like who was riding him in one of the first smut scenes. Also a lot of using (his) when you meant (her/ her’s) I’m on ch 6 now. Seeing some less errors. Story is still a solid 4.5 out of 5. But that’s only cause I need to read more. Plus hoping for more ball worship. Lol sorry I’m weird :/
Lmao. Yes, it's true that the quality of the few early chapter is poor, but the thing is that it has always been a rough draft of the chapters. I never edited it or did any proofreading. When I released the fanfiction, the first six chapters were just unedited drafts; the structure of the chapters was there, but they were all written badly. At that time, I didn't have much thought of seriously continuing the book, but later I put more effort and care into the novel. I don't correct the grammar and punctuation now because I don't want to lose the initial comments from the people, they are funny to see. But it gets better later and you will get more scenes of what you are looking for too.
Zarion116:Mooooore need Moore. Also heard up I noticed you switch/messed up which Clark sister is doing what. Like who is in the room with him. You say it’s Claire one minute then it’s Alicia instead. Like who was riding him in one of the first smut scenes. Also a lot of using (his) when you meant (her/ her’s) I’m on ch 6 now. Seeing some less errors. Story is still a solid 4.5 out of 5. But that’s only cause I need to read more. Plus hoping for more ball worship. Lol sorry I’m weird :/image
Nnnnnnice. Bring on the smuuuuut.
Bobainox:Lmao. Yes, it's true that the quality of the few early chapter is poor, but the thing is that it has always been a rough draft of the chapters. I never edited it or did any proofreading. When I released the fanfiction, the first six chapters were just unedited drafts; the structure of the chapters was there, but they were all written badly. At that time, I didn't have much thought of seriously continuing the book, but later I put more effort and care into the novel. I don't correct the grammar and punctuation now because I don't want to lose the initial comments from the people, they are funny to see. But it gets better later and you will get more scenes of what you are looking for too.image
hey, I just have a question: How many people are going to be in his harem? is it going to be more than 4 or less? BTW, I love the concept
Hehe, as of the last chapter, there are seven, and one more will be coming soon.
GnomePatty:hey, I just have a question: How many people are going to be in his harem? is it going to be more than 4 or less? BTW, I love the conceptimage
