Item: Untouched by the Outbreak
Rating: 2.8
Author: bellajsuss

bellajsussLv142mth

2024-09-26 13:44

OK, so I have read all the way to chapter 87, and all I can say is why. why did the girls have to die just like that? Do they come back? i see the system in the Tage, so maybe through that, but if not, I don't think I can continue. I hope ur story works out, though

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