Thanks for reading my book! I wanted to develop Axel's character slowly, so having him defeat the two strongest students wouldn’t fit. He impulsively challenged them after hearing about the reward, without a plan, and ended up being easily defeated. Plus, since he’s only known two people his whole life, he’s a bit of a wild card and unsure how to handle the gossip about him. I want to emphasize that I’m not trying to deflect criticism. I take every review/chapter comments to heart! Again, thanks for the comment c:

You realize this isn’t the actual complaint it’s the other comment this is more like a last straw you didn’t address anything or tell me you will to clear anything so I can only assume you can’t or forgot to?

Also developing a character doesn’t mean giving them unrealistic problems with holes at the end i.e his no kill rule even if as a last resort or if they’ve committed many atrocities it just shows you don’t know how to develop a character so you just manufactured an unrealistic issue/problem and plan to get rid of it then call it development (I hope you get rid of it