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Doubleyolkeggs
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2024-06-20 19:54

Hello everyone, I'm the author Doubleyolkeggs, and I'm thrilled to be serializing my new book here. This is a story about transmigrating to a prehistoric world, which might be a bit niche, but I've spent a lot of time contemplating the world-building for this narrative. I hope to present it to you in a very engaging way and I hope you all enjoy it and find ample joy in reading it![img=recommend]

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Lucky0_0
Lucky0_0Lv13

ntr? yuri? I hope not.. .

Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv14

Good luck. I'll keep an eye on it.

Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv14

I don't think so, not convenient for this kind of story though, because this will ruin every plot.

Lucky0_0:ntr? yuri? I hope not.. .
Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv14

Just hope that the author wouldn't make the ML stupid, as a modern man, this doesn't suit also

Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv14

well don't mind my word, a prehistoric World with no common sense everything is possible.

Kaiser_Evil:I don't think so, not convenient for this kind of story though, because this will ruin every plot.
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

what is the dumbest thing u have seen an mc do I am just curious u look like someone who was traumatized by stupid mc

Kaiser_Evil:Just hope that the author wouldn't make the ML stupid, as a modern man, this doesn't suit also
Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv14

Not traumatized but frustrating for the lack of common sense in some cases. I mean,.I've read a lot of stories so far but man when you see a grown man do stupid stuff and act like a child, I feel like the author is insulting my intelligence by doing so.

Daoist4MxvaV:what is the dumbest thing u have seen an mc do I am just curious u look like someone who was traumatized by stupid mc
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

well that's interesting , well me personally I don't hate a childish character as long as that character knows when it's time to be serious , does the character u read act childish even tho the situation is serious

Kaiser_Evil:Not traumatized but frustrating for the lack of common sense in some cases. I mean,.I've read a lot of stories so far but man when you see a grown man do stupid stuff and act like a child, I feel like the author is insulting my intelligence by doing so.
Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv14

Sometimes it's worse than that. I mean imagine, you have a power that can upgrade your body to a cellular level and enhance it to make it better, the brain should be included in the upgrading process to be able to have enough neuronal response capacity to receive enough information from the new body, yet none of those things is taken into account by any author and continue to make the ML more stupid than ever. That's why I'm a little bit frustrated sometimes.

Daoist4MxvaV:well that's interesting , well me personally I don't hate a childish character as long as that character knows when it's time to be serious , does the character u read act childish even tho the situation is serious
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

i am mean that's not exactly a justifiable reason to hate on it , in reading there is something called suspension of disbelief, sometimes u shouldn't expect the mc to think like u , to u enhancing your brain may seem like common sense bc that was what came to your mind but u will be surprised they will be millions or hundr ed's of millions of ppl who won't come to that same conclusion as u , not everybody can come to that conclusion immediately . In this world u can have some of the dumbest ppl saying stuff that the smartest of ppl didn't think about , the reason why I Said this is bc i am someone u would classify as dumb ppl , some ppl have pointed out things that came across as obvious but even then i have also been able to sometimes point out stuff that seem ,as obvious , if someone does something u wouldn't do , dont immediately get angry , same way u dont expect an infant immediately learn how to walk when there legs are strong enough u can't expect someone to immediately figure out there brand new abilities if u want the mc powers to be used in a particular way , instead of getting angry , comment to the author I want the mc powers to be used in a particular way . If u want common sense to be applied to the story these are things u should be concentrating on , u should be seeing if the mc knows the difference btw his wants and needs ,those the mc try and think b4 he entered a situation, is the mc trying to plan for his future , these are things u should be looking for in a mc , u shouldn't be looking at how they use their abilities ,

Kaiser_Evil:Sometimes it's worse than that. I mean imagine, you have a power that can upgrade your body to a cellular level and enhance it to make it better, the brain should be included in the upgrading process to be able to have enough neuronal response capacity to receive enough information from the new body, yet none of those things is taken into account by any author and continue to make the ML more stupid than ever. That's why I'm a little bit frustrated sometimes.
Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv14

No, this one was an example case, not really happened in any novel. What i want to point out here is the fact that some authors deliberately do this for the sake of plot only and that taste bad

Daoist4MxvaV:i am mean that's not exactly a justifiable reason to hate on it , in reading there is something called suspension of disbelief, sometimes u shouldn't expect the mc to think like u , to u enhancing your brain may seem like common sense bc that was what came to your mind but u will be surprised they will be millions or hundr ed's of millions of ppl who won't come to that same conclusion as u , not everybody can come to that conclusion immediately . In this world u can have some of the dumbest ppl saying stuff that the smartest of ppl didn't think about , the reason why I Said this is bc i am someone u would classify as dumb ppl , some ppl have pointed out things that came across as obvious but even then i have also been able to sometimes point out stuff that seem ,as obvious , if someone does something u wouldn't do , dont immediately get angry , same way u dont expect an infant immediately learn how to walk when there legs are strong enough u can't expect someone to immediately figure out there brand new abilities if u want the mc powers to be used in a particular way , instead of getting angry , comment to the author I want the mc powers to be used in a particular way . If u want common sense to be applied to the story these are things u should be concentrating on , u should be seeing if the mc knows the difference btw his wants and needs ,those the mc try and think b4 he entered a situation, is the mc trying to plan for his future , these are things u should be looking for in a mc , u shouldn't be looking at how they use their abilities ,
Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv14

And for the reason I'm frustrated about a stupid ML, is when it becomes a plot tool in the end to justify some plot hole, while it was a deliberate intention from some authors to do so. To be clear i do not hate stupid behavior when it is done well. What I do not like it's when it becomes an abusive tactical éléments or key element for the plot. And this kind of thing happened too often in the reincarnated novel genres, this is why I used the term grown man and common sense in the first comment.

Daoist4MxvaV:i am mean that's not exactly a justifiable reason to hate on it , in reading there is something called suspension of disbelief, sometimes u shouldn't expect the mc to think like u , to u enhancing your brain may seem like common sense bc that was what came to your mind but u will be surprised they will be millions or hundr ed's of millions of ppl who won't come to that same conclusion as u , not everybody can come to that conclusion immediately . In this world u can have some of the dumbest ppl saying stuff that the smartest of ppl didn't think about , the reason why I Said this is bc i am someone u would classify as dumb ppl , some ppl have pointed out things that came across as obvious but even then i have also been able to sometimes point out stuff that seem ,as obvious , if someone does something u wouldn't do , dont immediately get angry , same way u dont expect an infant immediately learn how to walk when there legs are strong enough u can't expect someone to immediately figure out there brand new abilities if u want the mc powers to be used in a particular way , instead of getting angry , comment to the author I want the mc powers to be used in a particular way . If u want common sense to be applied to the story these are things u should be concentrating on , u should be seeing if the mc knows the difference btw his wants and needs ,those the mc try and think b4 he entered a situation, is the mc trying to plan for his future , these are things u should be looking for in a mc , u shouldn't be looking at how they use their abilities ,
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

ok i understand , do u have recommendation for novels or fanfics

Kaiser_Evil:And for the reason I'm frustrated about a stupid ML, is when it becomes a plot tool in the end to justify some plot hole, while it was a deliberate intention from some authors to do so. To be clear i do not hate stupid behavior when it is done well. What I do not like it's when it becomes an abusive tactical éléments or key element for the plot. And this kind of thing happened too often in the reincarnated novel genres, this is why I used the term grown man and common sense in the first comment.
Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv14

Currently I'm reading the work of an author known as Adui. You may know his work "Infinite mana in the apocalypse" if you don't then go take a look. You'll be the judge of the work. And also my apologized author.

Daoist4MxvaV:ok i understand , do u have recommendation for novels or fanfics
Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv14

i do not read fanfic, I want a genuine story like this one.

Daoist4MxvaV:ok i understand , do u have recommendation for novels or fanfics
Medas_Morningstar
Medas_MorningstarLv4

images?

Medas_Morningstar
Medas_MorningstarLv4

it's a good read it's just you forget to describe your mc I can't really enjoy reading a novel it's mc is a question mark

jmori2010
jmori2010Lv15

I recommend The Young Master in the Shadows, Cursed gamer, Villain: The Play of Destiny, and Dodging Prison & Stealing Witches.

Daoist4MxvaV:ok i understand , do u have recommendation for novels or fanfics
DynamiteQA
DynamiteQALv15

How big is the Harem? Is it like 2 or 4

Rhodesthedemon
RhodesthedemonLv15

@Doubleyolkeggs. The novel is good but can you upload character pics and create a discord as well

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Oakley_Tallent
Oakley_TallentLv15

hello everyone, just wanted to let you know my thoughts on this book so far ~100chs in. The author often forgets what he has said in past chapters. For example, saying everyone's strength is limited to level 1 no matter how strong they are, yet still compares strength saying someone is stronger as a level 6, when all their powers are supposed to be limited suggesting there is no limiting factor🤦‍♂️. The pronouns used make it difficult to know who is talking and what gender they are, because the wrong pronouns are constantly used. The names all seem to be non-gender-specific. I'm not sure what gender a lot of the characters are because of the pronouns issue, but also because some male/female names seem to be used for the wrong gender. The flow of conversations will sometimes leave you scratching your head wondering what just happened because the responses make no sense based on what happened before and then what they end up doing after. On a plus note, the spelling seems pretty accurate so far, no notable mentions. The author desperately needs to write up a prologue to explain about the tribal fire, totems, and everything related to that to make things clearer to readers. Right now it seems like anything goes for the author🤦‍♂️. Overall, the book needs heavy editing. The story is interesting, but very confusing to keep track of what is what and what is happening. Makes me wish I had the time it takes to be an editor because there are a lot of books on web novel that desperately need a good editor😅. I like this book, but it's not good enough to pay for unless the author is willing to pay a really good editor to help make the story flow better. What is there is good, but it's like a diamond in the rough needing some heavy polishing to really stand out. Have a good day everyone!

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