Review Detail of CaioBR in Naruto: Talent exchange system
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My opinion. Positive points: The story is consistent and maintains an adequate pace. The main character is well constructed and very well detailed in history, personality and appearance. Negatives: In my opinion, the system is off-putting, it is generally used by beginning writers, it is a shame to be included in such a good story. However, you can read it without fear and I guarantee it's good.
Naruto: Talent exchange system
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I don't know if it's part of my personality, but I'm always suspicious of people who are too friendly, however, you could be right and it's all just paranoia in my head.
Skaviouz:I agree that systems are plot devices used by authors, but this system is a little friend toy mascot that's invisible and intangible. If anything, IMO the system aspect in this story essentially let's me infer that the mascot will not secretly try to scam the MC, but openly try to do so.
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CaioBR:I don't know if it's part of my personality, but I'm always suspicious of people who are too friendly, however, you could be right and it's all just paranoia in my head.
