DecayedTree

cool image

Although the Author kept repeating information, the ending made all of it worth it. this I liked the story, I have not seen any similar LOTM fanfics. Recommended!

you are repeating yourself way too much, it sometimes brings me out of it

the novel is good so far, but too much iinformation keeps repeating

also why are their numbers so low, if every member had a child every 20 years they would still number in thousands, even if half died at birth

Are his comrades also immortal?, causeits been like 900 years since he met Marcus, and he was described as sequence 9-8

sounds like reader pathway

I am hooked

Everyone talks like the MC, as if he is talking to fictional characters in his mind. The idea is good but that doesnt matter when non of the characters seem believable.

good start! I hope you choose to finish it one day.