as far as now it's pretty good.... just don't make it a harem

i really like the idea of this fanfic but the novel is full of info dump which make me skip the novel (specially the background of the characters and the location) and another problem is the way this fanfic written it's a bit harder to read which make me loses immersion on reading other than those I notice from what i read on some chapters it is somewhat okay

Always wanted douluo dalu archer fanfic , but elements from mahabharat and hinduism were unexpected but great . Support from india ......................................................

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It has too much info dump and use of excessive AI. The idea ia good, but it's like the author don't know how to properly write a soul land fic. They skip very important details but explain basic things for almost more than 3/4 of the chapters! I would recommend the author to read some good soul land fics and then properly write this one. Don't use a AI for writing the story! If english isn't your first language then use it to translate and check spellings and grammer only.

As a Indian guy, i would tell you that this is a very bad representation of Indians. We are not simp or naive as here like some protagonist of Indian television serials. We also shrewed and crafty. We never give anything for free due to some selflessness or goodness. This is simply not in our behaviour. maybe sometimes, we help other but not everytime. We love neutrality because this is were we reap most benefits. Like rest of people in world, we also have desires and we fullfill them at some cost. We never sit idle and believe that if something in our destiny then we get it. No, we work hard as much as possible to acquire it. this bro needs to improve his character behaviour. Not even our gods are this pure let alone a mortal. Give him some desires some bad characteristics, some weakness otherwise it's boring. Throw him in some difficult situations where some cultivation family is going all out to kill him. At start, you have done great work but it was wasted in latter part.

Well, until chapter 20 I think it's interesting, I just thought it was a little bad that it had so much information that probably everyone already knows (those who read the original work). I intend to follow the story, I really like the Douluo World.

Indian + chineases element don't know what to thik of it

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honestly dont like it at all he does not question anything his master says like why do i have to do that. He also has no personality its just boring to read with info dump after info dump even when most people reading this know the stuff already and if not, go read the original story its only 2 stars because i like the concept but will not be reading more of this