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2024-08-01 21:06

As a Indian guy, i would tell you that this is a very bad representation of Indians. We are not simp or naive as here like some protagonist of Indian television serials. We also shrewed and crafty. We never give anything for free due to some selflessness or goodness. This is simply not in our behaviour. maybe sometimes, we help other but not everytime. We love neutrality because this is were we reap most benefits. Like rest of people in world, we also have desires and we fullfill them at some cost. We never sit idle and believe that if something in our destiny then we get it. No, we work hard as much as possible to acquire it. this bro needs to improve his character behaviour. Not even our gods are this pure let alone a mortal. Give him some desires some bad characteristics, some weakness otherwise it's boring. Throw him in some difficult situations where some cultivation family is going all out to kill him. At start, you have done great work but it was wasted in latter part.

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Grategoku
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Yah says the guy who doesn’t support indian work. If you have made suggestions i had appreciated it but complain who doesn’t even support. Bravo bro it’s good that we have people like you in India otherwise it would have developed beyond recognition

Aditya_Sharma_8548
Aditya_Sharma_8548Lv3

I like your story.. don't drop your work

Grategoku:Yah says the guy who doesn’t support indian work. If you have made suggestions i had appreciated it but complain who doesn’t even support. Bravo bro it’s good that we have people like you in India otherwise it would have developed beyond recognition
Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5

How about you fanfic? You drop?

Aditya_Sharma_8548:I like your story.. don't drop your work
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