thank for chap

sir Author, I think this novel has very much potential at start starting was unique it give MC a opportunity a fabulous opportunity but AI writing has ruined everything i think is good if it written by author not by AI, although writting will be bad but it's okay than Ai where reading was like doing English course iIdon't understand the meaning of many words. second thing that ruin is that MC was flawless which was like food without a salt it's good to be flawed at least it give him a room for growth. i don't want to say that but MC was like a robot. And no one like a robotic MC we like a more humane MC . he should be angry he should also feel fear. just think about it who doesn't fear when goddess of death is trying to kill him without any experience. lastly MC power are not necromantic it was completely mess. MC can fight figure like read head without too much problem. MC has no character development he was like Mr perfect.

There is a huge flaw in Dark Blue silver Martial Soul. The Dark Blue silver martial soul will play a huge role in his future not only in Douluo continent but as also in God releam as i said description he will be evil god it's not mean he will be evil god king but literally a evil god.

aren't necromancer class uses tactic of fighting with huge numbers of undead then why he has only 1 spectre and I suggest you should delete those extra ability of fire and ice because it will only make main character power's mess and add some necromancer class ability like soulfire , skeleton Summoning , curses and zombies Summoning . and also don't make him op at started like fighting with red head and you let mc hone his skills at fighting arena and also add powercap in zombies , spectre and skeletons .

whether it is mortal or immortal world , physical fitness is really important 💪

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well mc will only have some talent and he will not lucky guy his luck will be some good sometimes bad he will acquire everything with his knowledge ,insight , ruthlessness and cunningness . he will not not trust much anyone and will not be emotional. he will be quite biased towards villainous character .

I haven't written the chapter yet , sorry I will write it today and will publish it at night

As author i hope you like it . please comment about story Thank you