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Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv115mth
2024-06-29 03:35

hello I'm going to abandon fanfiction, there are more interesting fanfictions and more work. This one really has nothing going for her. the only thing that was good was the fact that it didn't start at the beginning of the series with rick like most fanfictions. but the writing style is below average although correct I hear. the character has nothing going for him except that he knows what is going to happen which is not what super soldier has, he does not have an inventory system or even just special skills. if I had to reincarnate in such a world I wouldn't want it to be without anything without bonus

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XzDanielzX
XzDanielzXLv3

you are dead, you reincarnate with memories and still complain, so kill yourself, you should be dead anyway

Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

Can you give a constructive response please? just criticizing my nickname is useless and does not affect me or help the author

XzDanielzX:you are dead, you reincarnate with memories and still complain, so kill yourself, you should be dead anyway
XzDanielzX
XzDanielzXLv3

Nickname hum?

Benoit_Valtin:Can you give a constructive response please? just criticizing my nickname is useless and does not affect me or help the author
Gabriel_Brown_2075
Gabriel_Brown_2075Lv1

This is a fanfiction not real life, it's boring when you only have memories and reincarnate 3 months in because there is nothing special, you're basically just reading what happens in a different person's perspective while hanging out with the main cast he didn't get time to train, or study, or get prepared the only thing he can do is try to change the future which then the story would be really boring because what happened in the future is what kept people coming back to watch because of how entertaining it and if you get rid of that it's a bad story. And if he changes the story to much it's not the walking dead anymore it's just him and the cast in a zombie apocalypse.

XzDanielzX:you are dead, you reincarnate with memories and still complain, so kill yourself, you should be dead anyway
XzDanielzX
XzDanielzXLv3

the problem is not gaining power or not, the problem is him complaining that he didn't win, no one owes him anything

Gabriel_Brown_2075:This is a fanfiction not real life, it's boring when you only have memories and reincarnate 3 months in because there is nothing special, you're basically just reading what happens in a different person's perspective while hanging out with the main cast he didn't get time to train, or study, or get prepared the only thing he can do is try to change the future which then the story would be really boring because what happened in the future is what kept people coming back to watch because of how entertaining it and if you get rid of that it's a bad story. And if he changes the story to much it's not the walking dead anymore it's just him and the cast in a zombie apocalypse.
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