A Hentai System In The World Of Danmachi Book Review By Elvenerable - WebNovel

ElvenerableLv21mth

2024-11-07 11:45

If I'm honest the only good thing is the lemon scenes, the rest like character development and so on in general is short, damn it, I've seen better ones, if you want an example, read Marvel's impregnation system, I won't say that this one has potential or something is good In reality, the only good thing it has is that the protagonist is not an idiot and knows what he wants, besides that, nothing

A Hentai System in the World of Danmachi

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ParodyGirlAuthor

Thanks for the honest review. I'll read Marvel's Impregnation System later xD

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Insert_HereLv13

It is a smut fic. What did you expect, a philosophical main character?

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ElvenerableLv2

Que sea decente no una porquería que escribiría algún puberto osea tiene buena escritura y dramática pero en lo que debe se queda corto

Insert_Here:It is a smut fic. What did you expect, a philosophical main character?

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ParodyGirlAuthor

If you liked the previous version, I'll try to make even more chapters smu*s in this version. Be prepared!!! I'll also try to make the story more entertaining and with decent interaction between the characters. It's not certain that I'll manage that, but I'll try.

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Drunk_HermitLv14

Great potential until... 1. let's eat out a prostitute 2 i got a prostitute pregnant 3 the prostitute 's part of my harem but it's still a prostitute

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Arnab_PandayLv2

A full 5 star from me. Hope it will be as enjoyable as the previous one and maybe more. I think you should make the MC a bit more positive or at least not villain. And definitely not mind control. Also, maybe increase the word count per chapter?

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Nova255Lv1

before i start reading this. i just have one question is the MC a beta and submissive and get push around like the last novel?. because if it is this is not my cup of tea

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Lord_AzathothLv4

Baby, it's Sunday!!! 40 chapters accumulated... Gonna read’em all.🔥🔥🔥 I hope you've impregnated some good ones in this story...😅

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KatanexyLv3

I've known the author for a while (as a close friend) and I know how hard he works! So 5 stars! (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o)

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Kyaa_Lv4

You know what would be funny? If he bangs Bell’s Aunt

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Kronos_Lv12

A great story with good development, I guarantee you won't regret it hehe

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ArtoriapendraragonLv14

way better than last fic you write also I'm rooting for Freya aswell please make it happen 🥺🥺🥺

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Zarion116Lv15

It’s good. If you want smutty danmachi fanfic with all spice you need. Then you found it.

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