A Hentai System In The World Of Danmachi Book Review By ParodyGirl - WebNovel

ParodyGirlAuthor6mth

2024-06-08 09:00

If you liked the previous version, I'll try to make even more chapters smu*s in this version. Be prepared!!! I'll also try to make the story more entertaining and with decent interaction between the characters. It's not certain that I'll manage that, but I'll try.

A Hentai System in the World of Danmachi

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Arnab_PandayLv2

Make the FL pregnant faster.

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ParodyGirlAuthor

right

Arnab_Panday:Make the FL pregnant faster.

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Alibi_LullabyLv4

can you focus more on canon characters this time. seeing alot of OCs at the start kinda drove me off from continuing.

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ParodyGirlAuthor

Sure!

Alibi_Lullaby:can you focus more on canon characters this time. seeing alot of OCs at the start kinda drove me off from continuing.

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ParodyGirlAuthor

People in webnovel really hate rap* and mind contr*l

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Bendi_rism31Lv14

Can you make MC do the seggs with Loki?

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ParodyGirlAuthor

sure

Bendi_rism31:Can you make MC do the seggs with Loki?

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saintly2kLv12

Rap is somewhat ok, mind control a no-no if you want to write a wholesome story. But I like that as well 😃

ParodyGirl:People in webnovel really hate rap* and mind contr*l

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saintly2kLv12

Of course only in novels!!! Both is unacceptable in real life!!!!!!! 🗣️🗣️🗣️‼️‼️

saintly2k:Rap is somewhat ok, mind control a no-no if you want to write a wholesome story. But I like that as well 😃

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meatball_sanLv4

frfr 🗣️🔥🔥

saintly2k:Of course only in novels!!! Both is unacceptable in real life!!!!!!! 🗣️🗣️🗣️‼️‼️

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Vidhan_BhardwajLv4

saintly2k:Of course only in novels!!! Both is unacceptable in real life!!!!!!! 🗣️🗣️🗣️‼️‼️

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Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Have you decided whether to add lemons in you spider novel or not?

ParodyGirl:sure

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ParodyGirlAuthor

Im doing it

Sabaroth_zarkiel:Have you decided whether to add lemons in you spider novel or not?

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Wesley_HylryLv14

oh you're rewriting oh well .. let's go again 😂

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Maizy_TigerLv2

Autor já que você vai rescrever por favor faça sem rap e controle mental e não tirei os poderes dele eu achei aquela parte do deus uma Bosta

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ParodyGirlAuthor

Eu tirei o poder de controle mental e não terá mais o Deus irritante kkkk

Maizy_Tiger:Autor já que você vai rescrever por favor faça sem rap e controle mental e não tirei os poderes dele eu achei aquela parte do deus uma Bosta

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Lord_AzathothLv4

🤣

ParodyGirl:right

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mahare2553Lv1

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Ulescu_MihaiLv5

Alfia bell aunt gonna appear in the future? If you make her survive back 7 year's ago?

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Jorge_Hernandez_3316Lv14

hell I'm just glad to see a danmachi fanfic that has reliable updates

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Drunk_HermitLv14

Great potential until... 1. let's eat out a prostitute 2 i got a prostitute pregnant 3 the prostitute 's part of my harem but it's still a prostitute

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Arnab_PandayLv2

A full 5 star from me. Hope it will be as enjoyable as the previous one and maybe more. I think you should make the MC a bit more positive or at least not villain. And definitely not mind control. Also, maybe increase the word count per chapter?

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Nova255Lv1

before i start reading this. i just have one question is the MC a beta and submissive and get push around like the last novel?. because if it is this is not my cup of tea

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Lord_AzathothLv4

Baby, it's Sunday!!! 40 chapters accumulated... Gonna read’em all.🔥🔥🔥 I hope you've impregnated some good ones in this story...😅

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KatanexyLv3

I've known the author for a while (as a close friend) and I know how hard he works! So 5 stars! (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o)

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Kyaa_Lv4

You know what would be funny? If he bangs Bell’s Aunt

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Kronos_Lv12

A great story with good development, I guarantee you won't regret it hehe

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ArtoriapendraragonLv14

way better than last fic you write also I'm rooting for Freya aswell please make it happen 🥺🥺🥺

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Zarion116Lv15

It’s good. If you want smutty danmachi fanfic with all spice you need. Then you found it.

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