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Rygurd
RygurdLv43mth
2024-12-26 07:57

for me, I got interested in DxD world and the MC replaced Rias. It's a new thing for me. Even though the MC got the knowledge of OG DxD he doesn't try to bashed Issei just like any other DxD fanfic, That's a good one for me. The downside are, this is just too slow-paced, and the cliffhanger in every chapter is just so bad. one of the example is, when some character want to say something, author just put an end to that chapter. that's not how you end a chapter, at least let them finish what they said. Not only that, in a chapter when you gonna change the setting of place or time, at least used some symbol to differintiate it, like "------" or "###" or anything else. I think that's all about my personal opinion. Thanks, and good luck author.

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Voids_TrueOverlord
Voids_TrueOverlordLv14

this is stolen story from scribblehub the real author name is Harem-fan

Rygurd
RygurdLv4

thanks for telling me, brother!

Voids_TrueOverlord:this is stolen story from scribblehub the real author name is Harem-fan
Voids_TrueOverlord
Voids_TrueOverlordLv14

Rygurd:thanks for telling me, brother!
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